My Body Lies Over The Ocean Entry posted by Bfahome July 26, 2010 281 views Share More sharing options... Followers 0 My body lies over the sea I'm no good at astral projection So bring back my body to me
xccj Posted July 26, 2010 Oh, sorry, thought your body was dead, so we threw it out. That's what you get for leaving it laying around. Quote Link to comment
Bitter Cold Posted July 27, 2010 oh gosh i had pleasantly forgotten that old song curse you, bfa Quote Link to comment
Bfahome Posted July 27, 2010 I'd say Nice Hiaku, but the Syllables are off... The haiku has the wrong number of syllables because it's not a haiku. Quote Link to comment
Ynot Posted July 27, 2010 I'd say Nice Hiaku, but the Syllables are off... The haiku has the wrong number of syllables because it's not a haiku. I know, I was being facetious Quote Link to comment
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