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“On you feet, thing,” snarled Sidorak. In response, Keetongu tried to rise. But the blasts and the impact were too much. He slumped down again.“Whatever,” muttered the Visorak king. “The final blow is yours, Roodaka.” “Just like all the others?” Her tone was no longer respectful and submissive- in fact, it sounded positively insolent. Sidorak turned to find another surprise: Roodaka was walking away. “Where are you going?” he demanded. “Finish him!” “You’re the great king, Sidorak,” she challenged. “You do it.” Sidorak looked away from her, back to Keetongu. The Rahi had finally made it to his feet, battered, bruised… and very, very angry. The Visorak king turned back towards Roodaka, scowling, “We shall speak of this again.” Roodaka’s only reaction was a humph. So the viceroy thought the king so weak as to not be able to finish one miserable Rahi? He had commanded fear and respect through more than his army’s strength. He readied the blade on his arm, but before he could turn around, an unbearable pain erupted in his back. Keetongu, moving faster than the king could have ever guessed, had plunged the end of his pickax into his back. Ignoring the pain as best he could, Sidorak spun around and fired a burst of raw energy at the Rahi, sending it flying backwards into the far wall of the coliseum. He wanted to be certain the Rahi was dead, but his strength was already leaving him. Keetongu’s blow had been a fatal one. The king fell to his knees and rolled onto his back, his breath ragged from his agony. A shadow fell over him. “Not so tough after a meeting with Keetongu, now, are you?” came the taunting voice of Onewa. The fading light of the king’s eyes turned to look at the Toa Hordika. “I know you bear no love for me…” he grunted, “That I have harmed you more than perhaps anyone else ever has… But… Grant me one last wish.” Onewa stared down at him impassively, although he had an idea of what the king wanted. “Kill… Roodaka. Make her… pay.” With a final gasp, Sidorak expired.
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So, what do y'all think of said TV series? Bleh, sub-par, the most amazing thing since sliced cheese? Where you think there is room for improvement? Could the characters be brought out better? Could the story go in more depth? What are your expectations for said series in the future? Who do you want to see more of? Should they bring old villains back? Should they bring back that weird plot thread with Von Nebula's staff, that "can anything that evil really be contained scene"? Do you think that this has anything to do with Breakout? Do you think it would be cool if it did?What do you think of all these random questions?
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Wow, it's been a while, eh? So I was a bit busy during the downtime, as I'm sure all us MOCists were. I've got a couple of MOCs to show for it, as well as improved photography #1 - Unhuman Biologyhttp://www.flickr.com/photos/albinomoosecake/sets/72157626606654446/with/5669447056/ This one was made for the Australian National Building Competition. It obviously didn't get very far. (Also, horrible photography D:) #2 - Thaleen General I loved building this one. You might notice that it's primarily Hero Factory-based: that's 'cos I'd just recently got 2 Furno 2.0s :3 What fun they were. #3 - iCUhttp://www.flickr.com/photos/albinomoosecake/sets/72157627535597082/ This one was built for a little challenge over on another site. The theme was to build something using Gali hooks (of any colour) in the most creative ways. My opponent was Mike (known as Koltrin around here I believe), and this little beasty won. #4 - Jel'ehhttp://www.flickr.com/photos/albinomoosecake/sets/72157627403060829/with/5871380655/ This stubby little creature was made for an alien creation challenge over at Flickr, and won The design was deliberately stubby in proportions, and some have even called it 'cute'. o.OBTW, it glows. #5 - Piece Outhttp://www.flickr.com/photos/albinomoosecake/5997910640/in/photostream/ I made this one as a logo for another group that I administrate. The aim was to make something to represent the group's name: Piece Out. Also, this recently got a Daily Deviation award on DeviantArt #6 - Spikehttp://www.flickr.com/photos/albinomoosecake/sets/72157627473747400/with/6061133124/ This one was basically just for testing out a foot design I'd come up with earlier. Regardless, the head turned out to be the main attraction of the MOC. You can probably guess why it's called spike #7 - Combustiblehttp://www.flickr.com/photos/albinomoosecake/sets/72157627391398811/with/6079235119/ You probably thought this was Cuddles the Combustible. NOPE - Chuck Testa! Just kiddins, it's Combustible, the bigger, scarier and absolutely algebraic version of that little thing I entered in the HFBC. I have never used so many gunmetal pieces in one MOC before. #8 - F33-X2http://www.flickr.com/photos/albinomoosecake/sets/72157627634987508/with/6131561259/ I told you my photography improved This is my self-MOC, or self-mech if you prefer. It uses my favourite colour combo (dark blue/orange) and a whole load of dark blue pieces from a Bricklink order I got from Distorted. Personally, I think it's my best MOC to date :3 So yes, that's what I got up to during the downtime. It feels good to be back -FtC
