Simulacrum Posted November 8, 2011 Share Posted November 8, 2011 Hello, BZP! IT's Lord Darkon, with some concept art for a story i never got around to writing.Here's the original skecthes:http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/namealot/Art/airship_pirate_2.jpghttp://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/namealot/Art/airship_pirate_2_001.jpghttp://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/namealot/Art/airship_pirate.bmpAnd here's color:http://www.brickshel...ethius_copy.jpghttp://www.brickshel...anchor_copy.jpghttp://www.brickshel...pirate_copy.bmpThe First one Is Nethuis, Captian of a steampunk like airship. Elemental control over Iron and AirThe second is Anchor, a insane Toa of both Gravity and Magnetisim. First Mate.The Third is Sithias, a female toa of electricty/lighting and Cook and Navigator.If interested in writing this story, Pm me about it.Likey? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iPenguin Posted November 17, 2011 Share Posted November 17, 2011 It's a good start. The design is pretty cool, but I think it could be improved by adding some more details, and making it neter, e.g, keeping the lines straighter. The colouring could be a little better, and some possible shading might help too. Not bad though. The ships look really cool and have the potential to be that much better. Kutgw! Quote Majhost sucks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted November 21, 2011 Author Share Posted November 21, 2011 Thank ye very much. I appreaciate that somebody finally reviewed it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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