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all the first generation mask are cool, so i'll just mention the one i like aside of themwhich is:-toa mahri's mask, except for volitak and garai, i didn't really like them-toa phantoka's mask and onua mistika's mask-kualsi-the 2008's ignikayeah that's alot

I don't really have much to say here as this is a simple MOC, it's good though, the design is nice and well detailed, although i don't think that tire around the body isn't a good idea, you don't have any chains ?and yeah agreed with onewa7 about the waists, and this guy really need some hands and legs, other than that the MOC is great, especially the weapon, i like the fact that you use noble mahiki, the mask shape fits really well with the matoran

Overall i see thi is a very good MOC, i like that chest design which make him looks really good, the whole MOC itself is really well greebled and detailed, looks really good, those blue armor on the sides of his head somehow make him looks really awesome and manly, and it's been awhile since i see that old styled noble matatu used in MOC so it really give a good lookWeapon, i think is really good, i like that schyte which fits him really well, and the idea of making that bowgun-styled zamor launcher is geniusThere are, however, some part that i think need great improvement, i have two major complain here, first, the belly looks really skinny and too long, perhaps you can fix it, the chest and lower body is already good, and the secong the lower arms needs bulking, the shoulder is already good but the lower arms look small compared to other part of the MOCSome other minor complain that i have is the haus sticks out a bit far if you look it from the side, but again it's just a minor problem, i like that wheeled feetSo overall, it's a really great MOC, awesome job

This is one awesome creation with one awesome spine, the idea of using that bendable stick (or whatever you call that piece ) above the original rahkshi spine is really great, perhaps if you were to change those axles to something with sharper end it will be better.The body overall is okay, i pretty like it, the things that bug me are the hand looks kinda blocky for me, maybe making it look more organic will help,and you might wanna fill that gappy space on his elbows, the upper legs are good but the feet, just like hand, look kinda blockyThe tail is okay but can be better if you make it a bit longer and turn it to the other side so it's poiting to the back, not a big problem thoughOverall, it's a great creation, and btw i don't think you have too many black here, the color distribution is good, awesome job and keep MOCing

The silver mixes really well with the red. I also really like how snuggly the shoulder blaster joints fit. My only complaint is that... I can't think up of any. Great job on this!

Interesting. Like FF said, the color mix is great. I really like the torso but at the same time I'm not sure about the legs. Another nice MOC.

and i thought this topic is dead alreadymeh, good thing it hasn't

Nice use of the thornax launchers and zamors, it sure blends in well with the rest of the set, which is quite unusual.

Unique idea! Looks like a kind of prelude to Takanuva's rider.

Wow, great colors and flow. Even more amazing is that it looks like it belongs in the Bionicle world, as opposed to so many vehicles (2008) whose designs rely more on technic than those of the sentient beings, i.e. toa and the like. I think, though, that those zamor holders ought to go. And the "hordika necks" could be replaced with something light grey. Overall, nicely done!

Great idea, and executed well. All i would change would probably be the socket piece on the chest (it sticks out too far).

this is awesome, wings make it looks really cool, and i always love vahki :Danyway, although it's just a simple toamod build, you've made it really well, that claws remind me of exo toa, which is very nice, and perhaps if you could make the body bigger or bulkier it'll be much betterand try to take pic in a plain background, so it can be seen better,, and try to add some more color maybe red to match the vahki's head ?

agreed with Fsnorglepuff about this guy being looks really similar with matoro mahri, and i actually pretty like the idea of using that mata bodym, but as what fsnorglepuff(typing this name is a pain) said, it might be better if you don't rely on the inika build, maybe do some costum build or something, or if you still want to use it try to costumise it a bit, add something to cover that empty place below the mata body and on the upper sides of the mata body too.as for the arms i think it looks a bit too long, maybe use other pieces as lower arms ? and you might wanna bulk the legs a bit to make it betteranyway, nice job on this , although needs improvement, but still nice

I always thought of Tohunga as kind of the name of the weakened Matoran form seen in '01 and '02, but overall I prefer the term 'Matoran'.

somehow it looks nice, although basically it's only a toamod build, but it looks really nice, i like the idea of using that vezon's head as shoulder, although it looks a bit big, but still nice, and the use of that corrupted hau make it alot better, and that whip is nice too, maybe if you were to make the toros a bit longer and the belly a bit thiner it'll be better, IMO at leastanyway nice job on this guy

i'll say you're one of the few MOCer who i know have been using modified pieces in a very good way, it's really alot of improvement from the previous one, you really did a good job to the mask, and the overall body design, and the proportion is just awesome, especially the belly partso, overall, awesome job, keep MOCing

tohunga, somehow it sounds nicer to mebut i still use the term matoran when speaking with another Bionicle fan

i don't really have much to comment here other than awesome costum feet and nice way to put the zamor, which has been said by many others here, my additions are i love the way you made that costum limbs there, flows really well, adn if you want to you can add something to the head, since it looks kinda empty, maybe small horns or something ? other than that i think it's a great MOC

I feel like it should be adapted to the water, like how my Kohrak Bohronicle is a snowmobile, for the thick Ko-Wahi drifts. Perhaps a more boat-like design? IDK, other than that, this is just fine.

this thing is awesome, that's it, this got to be the neatest matoran build i've ever seen, and can still be easily recognized as taipu,very nice

this is awesome, although it really looks a mata nui revamp, anyway, this is very nice, i like how the body is built, really looks good an bulky, although it seems here that the yellow pieces are all gathered to the torso while the yellow are the legs and crotch, maybe if you spread the color more equally it'll help, and that legs are nice but i think you need to bulk the hordika legs part, it looks kinda skinny compared to the body, anyway still, it's a very great job, nice work

so far can see that it's an awesome MOC< it'll be better if you could provide a full image which shows the whole MOC, not just parts of it, as i can't find any of those in the brickshelf gallery, anyway, i love how you do the left arm, really bulky, the legs are nice too, i'm not a fan of those mechanical limbs though because they didn't look really mechanical to me, maybe add some greebles and/or cables, tube or something might help.and I don't know why, but that torso armor made of 3 blue HF pieces actually works hereoverall, pretty great job, keep up the great work

okay so i left bzp for a few days and return to found a lot of similarly named MOC on the BZP, which confuses me, just for info my MOC's name is bohrohicle, which stands for bohrok vehicle, not bohronicle, yeah i saw a guy with a MOC named bohronicle but when I see it it doesn't look anything like my MOC (and no credit) so i guess it has nothing to do with me, just the name happened to be similar, maybe you guys are confused by that, there are only 3 bohrohicle i found so far in BBC, which is mine, this one, and a red one by clickanyway i love to see another revamp of mine, i'm happy this one is a little different from mine, it really looks good as a snowmobile although it looks a bit empty below the user's seat, fill it with something, and maybe trying to bulking up the left and right sides of that bohrok head plate might help, and those onua weapon as wheel on the back are perfect ideasas for the matoran i think it's a really good job, the design is very nice i think , so overall, great job

not bad, in fact, i like it, you managed to create the vehicle really similarly to mine, i love the way you use those avtoran jetpack instead of zamor holder too, looks nice, although you need to improve the matoran IMO, maybe bigger legs, i think you've done a great job, :Dbtw to make the pic smaller, it took so long to load

This reminds me of the Boxer set from way back in the day. The Matoran-esque figure also hearkens back to those days. I myself never got a Boxer unfortunately. You, however, have come up with a great alternative in my book! I would try to make it a little bit longer if possible, as it seems that the Matoran barely fits on it. Standing next to it, however, looks great! Good job!

Okay, I finished, and even gave it a little rider. I built it the best I could, and added in some interior shots to see if I did it right.MainIt's red!FrontMy rider's supposed to be a Krana-infected '03 Matoran, with some more posability and armor. Also, the head is the result of a few modifications to a Metru head (cutting off the sides of the mouth piece), and a Krana (narrowing the bottom area)SideI switched out the Zamor Cartridges for Avtoran backpacks, since I'm using all my Zamor Cartridges on other MOCs, and I kind of like this better.BackSorry, it's a little dark. I also tried for a "gear assembly"-like back with a metru red Nuva Armor.BottomAlso a little dark. I just duplicated the bottom photo of yours pretty much.TopKind of an awkward way to do it, but ah well. I just added in some pieces connecting the front and back of the seat that held it better than I could figure out how to. Pose!Freestylin'! It took me forever to balance this.Vehicle insideYeah, I did my best with it. I couldn't figure out how to attach those larger gears on the back, so I just used a lightsaber blade, which didn't turn out as nice as I hoped it would.Rider armorlessProbably didn't need this shot, but it also shows the modifications to the head and Krana I made. Quick and messy.So, how'd I do? I'm thinking about doing a Lehvak-Kal version once I get him. Should be soon. And then I'll try and figure out how to put a launching Krana inside. I love to figure out functions like that.

This is an interesting concept. The vehicle is elegant yet simple and the color scheme doesn't clash. It would be nice if there was a seat for a gahlok Va and if the vehicle could launch multiple inactive krana.

Very cool shaping! The semi-spherical back just looks cool. I looks like a lot of fun to play with.

That looks very cool. I'll just critique them separately:...Very awesome MOC that looks very nice together, I have to try something like this sometime. I really love Bohrok related MOCs .

lol thanks, and one thing, it's supposed to be gahlok, not gahdok, the krana is orange and grey because gahlok's krana is orange, and grey because i don't have any other blue, so i just find some neutral color, and yes i feel like putting something on the krana's back like the 03 matoran but gear somehow looks weird on it so

Dang it, I should have known that. They're just one letter apart! Guess I can remove my self-proclaimed title of canon master. :PToo bad you don't have at least Gahlok's (fixed ) arms to fix the grey, it would really improve the MOC. I already started on reverse engineering this MOC in red, with some alterations, but I'm having trouble with the front and bottom. Could you post a pic of the bottom and/or instructions ? Thanks!EDIT: Neverm ind, I didn't see the MOCPages link. Expect the red one tomorrow!!

Pretty cool. I really like the ride, has a nice design. The matoran is nothing special, but works. Also, its very nice that you used mostly old-school pieces, gives a certain charm to it.

That's an interesting concept, and an even better MoC. The design of the vehicle is awesome and streamilned, and the color scheme and build of the rider look really cool.

This is a cool design. The vehicle is nicely done and so is the "Bohrok." I can't think up of any flaws with this so, great job on this!

That looks very cool. I'll just critique them separately:The Vehicle: Very, very cool, I really like the streamlined look to it, and it really looks like it was built from a Bohrok (and a Rahkshi, that somehow got two Zamor sphere launchers and a Nyrah Ghost Blaster ), and the "Bohrok" looks very nice on it. In particular, the seat is very clever. It just is the right shape for some small being to fit on it.The "Bohrok": Okay, I can tell it's supposed to be a Gahdok, but I just don't see why it's just grey and orange. Could you make it a little more colorful, or does it just "blend in" too much with the vehicle? If so, I'm fine the way it is. The body design looks very nice, and the trans-orange looks cool. Is the Tridax pod on the back inspired by the gear assembly on the 03 Matoran? That's just what it reminded me of. The chest armor looks cool too.Very awesome MOC that looks very nice together, I have to try something like this sometime. I really love Bohrok related MOCs .

This is really great, I'm trying to imagine seeing armies of these Bohrok zooming around Mata-Nui causing havoc. Another thing that would be cool is if the face plate could launch a krana onto another Bionicle, either way, this is still a very well-done MOC!

This is nice. I love the fact you have left it open for the other Bohrok colours. I would love to see a whole set of these one day. As for the "Matoran" thing, I think the grey bits should be blue and light blue, while still keeping the orange. A little seat for the Bohrok Va would be awesome

I think the vehicle is really neat, and so is the "Matoran." I also like the Thornax launchers in the front.

I can just see some Bohrok zooming around with temporary bodies on these bikes.Anyway, the bike doesn't look too complex, but it still looks very sleek and aerodynamic. I like the choice of Gahdok's parts on it. Also, can you easily switch out parts to change the colors? That would be neat.The matoran body for the krana could use some blue on it to match the bike, though.I give this MOC a 9/10.

This is awesome!!!I am currently working on a rpg idea where the toa died fighting makuta, and the bohrok are against the matoran, who are helpless. The matoran build boxors, and they keep getting better, but the bohrok make TLT's (Toa like Transports) and insert themselfs into the community. I decided to put the krana inside the toa's chest, in order for it to be more discreete.

honestly i never tried to make forts out of them (but it seems to be a good idea to try), i just used them for pieces storage