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  1. BAMSPLATI enjoyed making this one, I was sitting in my chair (FYI, people compare me to Sheldon all the time) thinking, what could the gang do next?And then it hit me, like a censor.pngYou might have noticed how much I love using this funny censor things. They fit so well as a comedic effect :PAnyway, Oneker here PGS'd before I closed the list (it will reopen later) so thats why his in now.With this comic said and done, expect more demons, guns, and the reapperence of Sir Priest Mcbloodyfistacuffs.Or as we call him, Lassy.Kudos to whoever gets the mundies reference, mundane if that helps you remember.(Its from a book, so yeah, I do read ya know)
    I guess that's gonna need a mop. :POh and its now Felinuva.
  2. Sorry i'm taking along time on the next comicbut here's a comic I made back in 2010 before the downtime I decided to show you. Click here!I have been working on a Chimoru R version of my cat sprite.I'll try and get it finished soon.

  3. Next comic! Click here!the first bottom panel has a reused scene from battle part 2.In this comic I was originally going to make Haley threaten the guards.Some of this comic is similar to something from Fosters Home.
    This comic uses some pretty old classics. And that's what the off-duty guards look like!I don't know a single man named Orlando.
    Orlando is meant to be Bloo pretending to be someone else called Orlando Bloo, if you have watched it.
  4. NEW COMIC!RG. I told you to watch it on my upstairs TV But No, you had to watch on the flatscreen!Note: I am practicing bubbles at the moment.Edited by Loganto The Le-Matoran, Aug 27 2012 - 02:13 PMRofl.Now that format worked out odd...Btw, where'd you get the cyberman sprite from?
    Its in my Blog.
  5. I like sagas, I think they're interesting. I have to be honest though that I think you should probably think more heavily on them, as there are some things I think you could improve on with them.Something that might help in further sagas is to improve on dialogue, story, and graphics (Not so much graphics to be honest, you're good there). The past two sagas seem to very similar. The dialogue is really simple, I can't take it seriously to be honest. "Lets get him", that doesn't necessarily sound like the best ending phrase of a comic in my opinion. Another would be from the 'shock treatment' (according to the file name) where Nireda easily complies to the Biocryptid's (?) 'demands'. I would've expected at least an argument considering that their friend was in danger and possibly being tested on and/or injured. So in my opinion maybe improving the dialogue to possibly make sense to the situation might help.I'm going to be completely honest and I have no intention of hurting your feelings (if I do) but I seriously think the story lines could use some work. So far this saga seems similar to the Feline Oneker Saga. Angers a person, gets abducted, gets used for said person's benefit, etc. I don't really see it as that diverse, this doesn't mean the saga is bad though, it just feels like you're redoing an older saga. Depending on how interesting the sagas are really depends on my point of view on how many should be made. I'll be honest that if you created another saga where Oneker angers someone, said person captures Oneker, and Oneker gets imprisoned again and electrocuted I will honestly probably stop reading. Its basically retelling the same saga but in a different environment. There is something I do enjoy about the stories of your sagas/comics though. They seem to connect with each one which I really enjoy when it comes to comic. It just gives the impression as if its some kind of grand master scheme, one thing leading to another (like the canon Bionicle story).I can't really say much about the graphics to be honest. In some cases they're really awesome and in some they just aren't. Not sure how to explain it other then that or how to 'fix' it.So basically, I like the comics, I find them entertaining and interesting. Some of the sagas seem to be similar in story though and I hope that any future sagas aren't the same because then it just gets uninteresting and easily predictable. Depending on how unique you think the story of the other sagas are depends on how many I feel you should make.~Soran
    Ok I'll try and improve in future and try not making Saga's similar.Here's another comic! Click here!its not part of the current saga though, its a parody of this video called Sonic Stereo, I made it to keep you entertained. This is my first comic in where non of the characters speak.I hope I did the right English translation of Facade's favourite song spiegelbild.Oh i'm now going on holiday and I'll be back next Tuesday.Ok goodbye!
  6. Hey guys when I complete this Saga with the people trying to catch my character, how many more sagas shall I do after it 2 or 3?
    You should brainstorm on ideas first.
    i concur with sybre. You should decide what they are about before omitting them.
    I have thought of what the next Saga's shall be about but should I do 2 or 3 of them before I start Season 2? :???:
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