MaksDudekVA

I finnaly fixed my entry.

the word count has changed to 1,326.

I also changed the ending slightly and added a new scene

also, my entry needs to be updated on the list to say that bones judged mine.

well, school delayed this a bit, but I have fixed my story.

the word count has changed to 1,326.

my entry is going together perfectly. I got the basic plot all set up.

for me its lariska, it would be awesome to have an idea of how dhe would look like. I also think the other toa hagah would have been cool. Really, all the characters that weren't given any visual representation should be given a set form.

<blockquote class='ipsBlockquote'data-author="Click" data-cid="492624" data-time="1358478623"><p>Wow, this is due in just two weeks. I really need to finish my entry. I'm about halfway.<br /> <br />Who else is working on an entry, by the way?</p></blockquote>I am. I'm about 67% done.

The saddest momment for me was Lhikan's death. Its so sad to see my Fav character of all time die. Besides Matoro's sacrifice, I thought that the part of Journey's end when Mata Nui went back to sleep after revitalizing Spherus Magna was also pretty sad.

Another sad moment for me was actually in Dark Mirror where Takanuva was witnessing all these characters being slain.

I may make a showcase video on the map. Is that cool with you guys?

my first set was Visorak Vohtarak.

<blockquote class='ipsBlockquote'data-author="bonesiii" data-cid="488539" data-time="1357754717"><p><strong class='bbc'>The following comes from an authorized Contest Judge: At least one inaccuracy or error has been found in your entry. After reading this judge post, you are authorized to edit your entry to fix these errors. After editing to fix these things, please post in the entry topic saying what you changed.</strong><br /> <br />Lotsa of easy grammar fixes. A couple of possible story issues too, I think all easily fixed as well.<br /> <br />This was an interesting take on a Nidhiki entry. I felt you could have done something to get more psychological at the end in the first-person narration, giving us Nidhiki's real feelings about it -- does he actually think what he said? Basically, the guy died, get over it, nothing else I could have done, and that's that? I would recommend a bit of editing in there to give us something. It could be quite interesting considering the opening paragraph, and yet that he IS a DH and he might not feel able to make a comment in writing that his boss might feel is too "good guy ish". So not sure, but food for thought. <br /> <br />Also, I noticed you were intentionally making the extra Toa MOCable; clever. </p></blockquote>Believe it or not, these extra toa were based on my current MOCs. The toa of fire is toa jalokim, my self MOC. Toa Ailuj is the toa of lightning, and Nevets is the toa of plant life.I am currently making a series about these Toa in fact.<blockquote class='ipsBlockquote'data-author="toa jalokim" data-cid="488651" data-time="1357766189"><p><blockquote class='ipsBlockquote'data-author="bonesiii" data-cid="488539" data-time="1357754717"><p><br /><strong class='bbc'>The following comes from an authorized Contest Judge: At least one inaccuracy or error has been found in your entry. After reading this judge post, you are authorized to edit your entry to fix these errors. After editing to fix these things, please post in the entry topic saying what you changed.</strong><br /><br /> <br /><br />Lotsa of easy grammar fixes. A couple of possible story issues too, I think all easily fixed as well.<br /><br /> <br /><br />This was an interesting take on a Nidhiki entry. I felt you could have done something to get more psychological at the end in the first-person narration, giving us Nidhiki's real feelings about it -- does he actually think what he said? Basically, the guy died, get over it, nothing else I could have done, and that's that? I would recommend a bit of editing in there to give us something. It could be quite interesting considering the opening paragraph, and yet that he IS a DH and he might not feel able to make a comment in writing that his boss might feel is too "good guy ish". So not sure, but food for thought. <br /><br /> <br /><br />Also, I noticed you were intentionally making the extra Toa MOCable; clever. <br /></p></blockquote><br /><br />Believe it or not, these extra toa were based on my current MOCs. The toa of fire is toa jalokim, my self MOC. Toa Ailuj is the toa of lightning, and Nevets is the toa of plant life.<br /><br />I am currently making a series about these Toa in fact.</p></blockquote>

why are you interrupting my interview with TTV?!

your welcome. I guess that answers the question of why stars Tahu looks different from Tahu Mata.

wheres my cane?

that cracked me up.

huh. It dissapeared. But I do remember reading that on the tahu page a few months ago.

But he has kept his apadtive weapon, which is cool, I guess.

You know what, erebus should ask Greg if it is canon that Tahu still had his adaptive armor when he was devolved by the mask of light.

Nevermind, I found the page!

http://biosector01.com/wiki/index.php/Adaptive_Armorhttp://biosector01.com/wiki/index.php/Adaptive_Armor

its at the bottom of the set information section. I'll quote it

"In 2010, the additional armor featured on the BIONICLE Stars Tahu set represents the Adaptive Armor in its default form on the devolved Toa."

 

I think he just looks different in the Stars form because he has Adaptive Armor instead of his original Mata armor. So he's not a Toa Nuva anymore, but he's still not quite the same as he was originally.

That's my thinking. I don't know if anything's been confirmed regarding that, but if the Ignika didn't need to remove his adaptive weapon for the Golden Armor to work, I don't see why the rest of the adaptive armor would have to go. Like I said before, I think the adaptive armor adapted to the presence of the Golden Armor, explaining why some of Tahu's red armor was replaced with Golden parts.

 

It has in fact been confirmed that tahu stars was wearing adaptive armor, is sais so on BS01. If Tahu stars wasn't wearing adaptive armor, he would look like his 2001 mata form.

How many times do the stories have to be judged in order to be up in the polls?

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actually the reason tahu mata looks like he did in the stars line was because he was wearing adapted armor. If you took the adaptive armor off him in 2010, he would look exactly as he would have in 2001. in other words, 2001 form was hidden under a layer of adaptive armor.

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But in the picture, Tahu is in Stars form; before he got the Adaptive Armor.

He looked like this in the picture because of marketing, but the picture itself is non-canon.

actually the reason tahu mata looks like he did in the stars line was because he was wearing adapted armor. If you took the adaptive armor off him in 2010, he would look exactly as he would have in 2001. in other words, 2001 form was hidden under a layer of adaptive armor.

Well, I'm kinda new.

I don't really know who this is on the mug, when I think of Bionicle and 'the chronicler', I think of Takua

I don't know who Crunchbite Nuva is, sorry.

It's cool though.

No worrys! Crunchbite nuva made the original piece of artwork, and the chronicler's coffee thing made it to the bzpower news and stuff. I made the first Chronicler's Coffee MUG. Also, the guy on the logo is certavus, and since he was never a chronicler, chruchbite nuva (aka Fluffy) changed it to show takua's pakari.

same here

ahh, ok. The map is pretty cool though. but for some reason when you sleep in Jaller's bed you get teleported somewhere when you wake up. Is this an easter egg?

excuse me?

its in the newest TTV video on Do NOT bypass the filter. -B6

this is amazing! no water chunk though.

Im gonna be the first fan to play it! mwahah!

dudes! its been released!!!

I got to say it before everyone else! trolled!