I have to say, this is truly amazing. You've done a great job with the storyline, adding matoran to your group, and just the overall effect of the game and how it matches with the original design of MNOLG 1. My only real complaints are that I need more chapters, and that there were a few typos here and there, but I'm always picky about grammar and ended up trying to modify the dialogue in the files for a punctuation mistake... As a computer nerd, I look forward to seeing how you handle the battle system and various structures of minigames. Great work!