JetZXV

Clever. Veeeeery clever. I'm thankful that I checked back when I did.

Looking back on my statement, I realize that I might have come off a bit too angry. I love this story, don't get me wrong; I was just having a bad day and was hoping that the new chapter would raise my spirits. Needless to say, it did not. Click is right. Watching characters I've come to like and relate to get absolutely CURB-STOMPED feels like a sword being driven through my gut. You built up the rage of characters like Calor only for him to get tossed around like a rag-doll with minimum effort, which hurts to see. Add in the fact that we don't know Piras' plan, aside from abandon the island and kill anyone who refuses to leave, plus the fact that the series is taking a hiatus, and you leave people with a lot of nervous questions. Regardless of my rantings, I'm glad you're taking a break for a bit. It means that you get to come back into it with a fresh mind and with less stress, making the story better. Take the time you need. We'll wait. I will request only one thing be answered. What are the Turaga up to and how do they feel about the situation?

I hope you kill off the Miro. Not one or two, all of them. That hurt to read and I want all their deaths to be so ironic I can only laugh at it. Admittedly, the idea of the Toa we're rooting for losing is not one I've seen before, aside from the Nuva on Voya Nui, and I'm not sure I like it. Considering they're the protagonists, I won't be surprised if they either aren't fully mind-controlled or will be saved by Tenius, but I'd like to see a recovery soon. Any more of this Piras being a dominant figurehead without legitimate competition and I might kill someone.

Been watching a lot of Persona 4 videos and it got me thinking about which characters would sound like who. So, I'll post the question here. If this got voiced over, who would you cast as the characters? I personally think Venti might sound like Adachi voiced by Johnny Yong Bosch. Here's hoping Venti doesn't go the same way plot-wise.

That's a she? Well, it does give the team a good variety.

Okay, good.

Uira's gonna make it... right? RIGHT? She isn't getting x-ed of for the purposes of driving the characters, right? Don't do this, man! This team makes me happy and I don't want any of them to go away!

I go away on a trip for five days and come back to three chapters of Nova Orbis. WHAT.

Honestly, I would really like to see more Toa joining this group, preferably new ones. I really liked the idea that only one of the Toa was from the original story, so maybe tossing in another matoran from the old world would be fun. Maybe use some special stone to change their element and you'd have a full set. Maybe you have more planned out, but I think it would be interesting to see.

This entire thing is really amazing! I found out about the comic through TTV and I read all of it over the course of the past day. I can honestly state that I've never seen a BIONICLE fan story that was this good; considering that I've been searching for over seven years now, that shows how good this is. I'll be honest when I state that I LITERALLY made my BZPower account today just to comment on this. Good job and I wish you the best of luck in the next arc.