Ah yes; suspense and mistery, two of the biggest tools that a writer can use, and also the two taht can give the biggest troubles. First, let me just add that I've indeed read all of the BP until now bones; the first epic and the 4 SS on a day, and I read the beggining of AoS just the oher day; although I haven't been able to review due to my busy schedul, that doesn't mean that the story doesn't uninterest me, quite by the contrary.
First, let me just point out this little thing, the fact that I too have a series of epics and short stories, and up until this point they only consist on extensions and turn-arounds on the original storyline, taht slowly conjure up as a puzzle. I think 've been quite sucessfull with that structuration, even though I still have to fix two temporal mistakes that up until now nobody noticed(but, like I'm sure you'll understand, this bugs the mind of the writer a lot).
The BP, is a series taht I found quite interesting, due toits deviation from the storyline, and the presence of the source for deviation, even though it's covered by mistery. In fact, I have to admit that since I first saw the banner of the BP I thought 'Now, this must be quitean interesting epic, yet, storyline perfect, coming from bones', or something along those lines.
Yet, what most fascinated me in the BP was inf act, the overall sense of mistery,of something misplaced, of small clues left in the descriptions and events, on the small subintended prophecies, on the recurring circumstances(okay, now I'm going too much like when I examine 'The Maias' in my portuguese class )...
Yes, indeed mistery is a very difficult sword to focus your power through, but you manage to do it quite well, something I love in your stories, and for that I congratulate you. But hey, the task is hard on all of us, we can only hope for the some good luck/skill that will really help us; otherwise, what are we but empty Matoran, deprived of their Kanohi to live?
Putting a BP review on my to-do list as I sign off and anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
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