Hoo lookie here, CoTA gave his two cents, so I'm going to be put down my dollar bill. First of all, I'm just going to say that CoTA told me to read this, so I much appreciate his referral. Because...... This epic is truly epic. Thanks for writing this, Cederak! I spent the last month slowly devouring it, and I enjoyed every morsel of this piece. Although it was tough to believe Adrinor's passivity when the gang shot Torema, it is a petty remark before the greatness of this story. God, it was good. I felt emotion, glee, and sadness. Although I hated the tragedy of it all, reality is sometimes tragic, and I respect your ability to not back down from this reality. And not to mention, I'm in college too (as is CoTA) so this was definitely great downtime for me. As an inspiring artist, do you mind if, sometime, I drew up fan art of the gang? I'd love to give myself visuals of these well thought out characters, and I'd show them to you, although I can understand you not using them as the words should do the work, not the image. Still, thanks for writing such a gripping tale!
