Infamousevil Posted January 13, 2015 Share Posted January 13, 2015 Toa Gurts grimaced as he braced his massive sword onto his shoulder, the Toa of Iron knew someone was following him. he checked He artificial left arm and the blaster it contained, determining that it was all in order he addressed the one following him. "If you want to start a fight go ahead, I can guarantee that you won't win." Spoke the annoyed Toa. "Yeah I think we went a little to far here." came a voice. "True, but your idea would've been boring if we went with it." spoke another. "Boys if you insist on arguing you will leave him with a bad impression of us." spoke a female voice. "Yes listen to her so we can get this over with!" shouted an angry voice. "Our shadowy friend is right, if we delay any longer he won't accept our offer." said the last voice. Immediately five Toa stepped forward, then a Toa of water stepped forward and spoke. "Greetings I am Mera, Toa of water and the leader of this team." She pointed to a Toa in yellow armor, "This is Ampus, Toa of lightning. Pointing to a green colored Toa she continued. "This is Gorrin Toa of air." "This is Larros, Toa of stone, he doesn't speak much." "And this "charming" individual is Torias, Toa of shadow. Don't worry he's on our side, but he will try to kill you if you bother him too much, or if he catches you lying to us. It's probably a good idea not to interact with him much." She said pointing to a Toa whose body was literally oozing shadow, she continued. "We want you to join our team." So what do you guys think? Quote The surprise was vampires! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted January 13, 2015 Share Posted January 13, 2015 I believe this belongs in the comedy section, but I can't say until you post another chapter. Nice job so far. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infamousevil Posted January 13, 2015 Author Share Posted January 13, 2015 Sorry I meant this to be serious, also can you figure out which two characters are sort of named after anime and video game characters? Also I will admit I am not that great at writing. Quote The surprise was vampires! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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