Arrow kit

[PhoenixFireBlaze]

Here is an amateur kit i made its still in process I called it the arrow kit. here feel free to leave your opinion on this sprite sheet. (it will most likely fail anyways )

Edited September 3, 2012 by Phoenixfire

[Sybre]

That looks too much like Chimoru, buddy. Needs to be more original looking. And the masks look a little small...

[Axilus Prime]

I think the mask size was to better proportion them as heads for Matoran.However, that is set inaccurate and it does look too much like Chimoru.

[P~M]

BroBroBroThat's Chimoru.As the others have said, that looks a lot like Chimoru, especially the body and hands. In fact, on closer inspection, those ARE Chimoru hands. Now I don't have anything against Chimoru fan additions (ahem, please direct your attention to the links in my sig), but this is technically plagiarism.EDIT: The fists, I mean. Kudos on the open hands.

Edited September 2, 2012 by Piraka~Mistika

[PhoenixFireBlaze]

here thanks for your opinion but is this better?

[Axilus Prime]

Yes, that's much better. A rigid, mechanical-looking style. Now all you need is shading, that 3/4 view so they aren't staring at the viewers, and oh dear Mata Nui please don't base the masks off of RZMIK they look terrible.

[Sybre]

That looks so much cooler and authentic than your smooth Chimmy stuff.

[PhoenixFireBlaze]

That looks so much cooler and authentic than your smooth Chimmy stuff.

Thanks! but what is chimmy?

Yes, that's much better. A rigid, mechanical-looking style. Now all you need is shading, that 3/4 view so they aren't staring at the viewers, and oh dear Mata Nui please don't base the masks off of RZMIK they look terrible.

And what is RZMIK? And thats actually ally the best 3/4 view i can do right now.. Edited September 2, 2012 by Phoenixfire

[Axilus Prime]

Chimmy=Chimoru.RZMIK=Rahi Zaku Mini Kit, a kit famous for good poses and use in MASes...and equally famous for having masks that aren't quite great. And the masks you made look heavily based on that kit.

[dRoko]

TNG, i think if a guy asks what RZMIK means, he does not even know what that means..... Anyways, the masks can be better, but it is good.

[P~M]

Yeah, that's much better. The shading needs some work, but it's much better and more original. I like it.

[Maphrox: Toa of Polygons]

It needs shading. At the moment it looks somewhat flat.Also, I think the age of black outlines in sprite kits is somewhat bygone.