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Certyvus Wip =3

Posted by Laka , Mar 19 2009 · 226 views

WIP
I'm getting tired of all this not showing you guys MOCs and junk. Here's my Certavus WIP. Colors will be fix'd some, possible reworking on the legs, weapons are placeholders, as is the yellow printed Roborider head, and the iso will be changed on the next photoshoot thanks to Seran. ^__^



-Laka


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I already told you my thoughts about this a while ago.

Though, I forgot to mention, the head looks a little small with all the buffness of the body. Maybe a custom one? If not, this is definitely better than Strakk, but I just noticed that. tongue.gif
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I must do everything in my power to stop you.

Because it's too good D:
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Is the use of Hockey armor inspired by my entry?
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QUOTE(.:Toa Velox:. @ Mar 19 2009, 09:01 PM)
I already told you my thoughts about this a while ago.

Though, I forgot to mention, the head looks a little small with all the buffness of the body. Maybe a custom one? If not, this is definitely better than Strakk, but I just noticed that. tongue.gif

Well, he's got 5 heads wide on the shoulders. If I'm remembering correctly from my superhero drawing book, that's about right.


QUOTE(Dorek @ Mar 19 2009, 09:13 PM)
I must do everything in my power to stop you.

Because it's too good D:

=3

QUOTE(Hunter Kirax @ Mar 19 2009, 09:32 PM)
Is the use of Hockey armor inspired by my entry?

I don't think I've actually seen your entry.

-Laka
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Frankly, I don't like the color scheme. :/
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QUOTE(Bfahome @ Mar 19 2009, 10:28 PM)
Frankly, I don't like the color scheme. :/

Would that be the colors or the way I put them together?

-Laka
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QUOTE(Winslow @ Mar 19 2009, 11:39 PM)
QUOTE(Bfahome @ Mar 19 2009, 10:28 PM)
Frankly, I don't like the color scheme. :/

Would that be the colors or the way I put them together?

-Laka


Couldn't say for sure (this is why I don't often review MOCs anymore >___>), but the yellow-black-white scheme just seems a bit off. There's the white thighs then the black and yellow shins then the white feet.

I'd need to see more angles to comment any further on it.

Also I'm tired.
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QUOTE(Hunter Kirax @ Mar 19 2009, 09:32 PM)
Is the use of Hockey armor inspired by my entry?

It's a very common idea, you didn't invent it. Besides, I think Laka has used that hockey chest armour piece in the past already.



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cags//cunninghat/2x2b
Mar 20 2009 03:29 PM
QUOTE(The Zipper @ Mar 20 2009, 02:17 PM)
QUOTE(Hunter Kirax @ Mar 19 2009, 09:32 PM)
Is the use of Hockey armor inspired by my entry?

It's a very common idea, you didn't invent it. Besides, I think Laka has used that hockey chest armour piece in the past already.

This one. Wasn't original when I did it, either, and that was like three years ago.

Also, I swear, if somebody goes and revives that topic.....
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QUOTE(Cags @ Mar 20 2009, 03:29 PM)
QUOTE(The Zipper @ Mar 20 2009, 02:17 PM)
QUOTE(Hunter Kirax @ Mar 19 2009, 09:32 PM)
Is the use of Hockey armor inspired by my entry?

It's a very common idea, you didn't invent it. Besides, I think Laka has used that hockey chest armour piece in the past already.

This one. Wasn't original when I did it, either, and that was like three years ago.

Also, I swear, if somebody goes and revives that topic.....


IT HAS BEWBSSSSSSS *zomg

Also I told you that the color layering sucks.
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Why aren't those arms filled in? D=

BtB
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Was your use of LEGO inspired by LEGO? 8O
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GreenBioGuy
Mar 21 2009 08:39 PM
Nice WIP thar! biggrin.gif

Color Scheme wise, I like the white/black/yellow, but I just don't like the overall placement; I would recommend a bit of yellow on the torso.

The build is excellent; you made an excellent torso (love the shoulder armor). The main gripe I have is with the thighs. There are some unsightly gaps and the apparent technic holes and pins look unsightly. I would say add some smoothness in there (IMO wink.gif ) Also, the only apparent black is in the arms and legs (but even there it's in the back); I would suggest you change that white metru torso armor on his lower torso to black. Right now it's all white.

While I wouldn't think of Certavus as yellow white and black, if you do a good job of pulling of a balance of the colors in the MoC I'm sure that the idea would grow on me. You've got a pretty impressive MoC here Laka; good luck in the contest! smile.gif

~GBG~
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cags//cunninghat/2x2b
Mar 21 2009 08:52 PM
Lower legs need fixing, switch the Piraka legs out for white/off-white ones and switch the 3L white bits to black. That way it'll match the shoulders/not look fugly.
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QUOTE(Bfahome @ Mar 19 2009, 11:09 PM)
Couldn't say for sure (this is why I don't often review MOCs anymore >___>), but the yellow-black-white scheme just seems a bit off. There's the white thighs then the black and yellow shins then the white feet.

I'd need to see more angles to comment any further on it.

Also I'm tired.

Oic. Wait until it's finished and then tell me if it looks better. I have to fix up the colors.


QUOTE(Bundalings @ Mar 20 2009, 05:34 PM)
Why aren't those arms filled in? D=

BtB

I was lazy. They are now.


QUOTE(Dorek @ Mar 20 2009, 11:21 PM)
Was your use of LEGO inspired by LEGO? 8O

OBVIOUSLY 8O


QUOTE(~GreenBioGuy~ @ Mar 21 2009, 08:39 PM)
Nice WIP thar! biggrin.gif

Color Scheme wise, I like the white/black/yellow, but I just don't like the overall placement; I would recommend a bit of yellow on the torso.

The build is excellent; you made an excellent torso (love the shoulder armor). The main gripe I have is with the thighs. There are some unsightly gaps and the apparent technic holes and pins look unsightly. I would say add some smoothness in there (IMO wink.gif ) Also, the only apparent black is in the arms and legs (but even there it's in the back); I would suggest you change that white metru torso armor on his lower torso to black. Right now it's all white.

While I wouldn't think of Certavus as yellow white and black, if you do a good job of pulling of a balance of the colors in the MoC I'm sure that the idea would grow on me. You've got a pretty impressive MoC here Laka; good luck in the contest! smile.gif

~GBG~
Thighs will receive some attention before I post it.

The point was he's wearing white armor, which is why his torso armor is white. I'm trying to cut down the black in other places to compensate.

Yeah, the colors are the biggest problem right now. I'll definitely fix them up some before I post the final. Thanks.

QUOTE(Cags @ Mar 21 2009, 08:52 PM)
Lower legs need fixing, switch the Piraka legs out for white/off-white ones and switch the 3L white bits to black. That way it'll match the shoulders/not look fugly.

Meh to the Piraka legs. Other armor might replace them.

-Laka
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Darnit Laka, I'm a revamper, not competition!

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Seriously, this is awesomer than nearly every entry I've seen so far.
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