TuragaNuva Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 (edited) Well, I've taken pictures of all the MOCs that I made during BZP's downtime, and now it's time to post them! Here's the once I made most recently: Shadow Takanuva.^click for gallery (when public)^Here's some more pictures:FrontBackStaff converted into scythe/Kohlii staffStaff sheathed"Come to me, my brethren!"Comments and/or criticisms are appreciated, and please click the links to some of the other MOCs in my signature! - Edited October 28, 2011 by TuragaNuva Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PooZy Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 (edited) Firstly this is a pretty good toa - gratz. Onto the criticism:The shoulders are way too high, it makes this guy look like a hunch back. You really need to moderator the body so that the arms connect in a different way that negates the need for the 'hordika heads' Secondly the upper arms look very bare. The armour you've attached only really covered the back of the arm - but maybe twisting it around would help this. In any case it's a good model. Nothing wrong with the colour scheme whatsoever. Looks very trim. Edited October 27, 2011 by PooZy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akuna Toa of Sonics Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 Nice use of some Hero Factory limbs. The legs are pretty cool too, but the nuva shoulder armor looks out of place. Quote Does anyone want to play the Master Chief Collection with me? I'm trying to get a team going for ranked. PM for GT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TuragaNuva Posted October 28, 2011 Author Share Posted October 28, 2011 Firstly this is a pretty good toa - gratz. Onto the criticism: The shoulders are way too high, it makes this guy look like a hunch back. You really need to moderator the body so that the arms connect in a different way that negates the need for the 'hordika heads' Secondly the upper arms look very bare. The armour you've attached only really covered the back of the arm - but maybe twisting it around would help this. In any case it's a good model. Nothing wrong with the colour scheme whatsoever. Looks very trim.Thanks! As for the hunch-backedness, I think that the long mask contributes to making it look like his shoulders are higher than they are. Also: while the tops of the Hordika necks are somewhat high, the actual shoulders are lower. However, if I work more on him I'll keep your comments in mind . Nice use of some Hero Factory limbs. The legs are pretty cool too, but the nuva shoulder armor looks out of place.Thanks for your compliments! I might try changing the armor, but I'm somewhat attached to it because it's the armor that Takanuva had on his shoulders Thanks again, both of you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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