McNugget Posted February 21, 2015 Share Posted February 21, 2015 (edited) Lennox the Archer! https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B5EdRvSKnOeLejFxb0I2T2c1N1E/edit https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B5EdRvSKnOeLbHpzMU1MZ0lVZzQ/edit https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B5EdRvSKnOeLa1hTVG9NZy1jTlU/edit https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B5EdRvSKnOeLUDBuQVM5UjdBb0k/edit https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B5EdRvSKnOeLM2tQcmhzc2s2M0U/edithttps://docs.google.com/file/d/0B5EdRvSKnOeLbHpzMU1MZ0lVZzQ/edit Edited February 24, 2015 by Dragon11603 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ptah Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 Topic got swept downstream with all the contest entries? The creation looks good. The story could use a tweak here and there. I'd have opened with Lennox and explained only as needed the masks, his powers and his mission. Also see if you can post the pictures themselves into the forum posts. I think you waere trying to build up mystery before the full reveal of Lennox, but clicking a link, ok-ing to leave the sight to see it and only seeing part of a body killed tension instead of building it up. Quote "Honor those the dragons heed, in thought and favor, word and deed" "Worlds are lost and worlds are saved, from those dangers dragons brave" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McNugget Posted February 24, 2015 Author Share Posted February 24, 2015 (edited) Ok, yeah, storys a bit bad, I know...I was thinking of deleting the story all together... Edited February 24, 2015 by Dragon11603 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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