Renzari Posted November 16, 2015 Share Posted November 16, 2015 (edited) Review for Bionicle: The New Order! To read it: http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/20802-bionicle-the-new-order/ Part 1: Posted Part 2: Posted Part 3: ALMOST DONE!! But never coming out... Part 4: Never Part Final: Never Character List: Part 1 Sora: Ex-Ruler of Okoto, Rumored Demon King, teamed up with Renzari Natalie: Assistant to Sora, Witch Doctor Renzari: Leader of The Lost Order Natalie: Renzari's Partner, Sniper Flixen: Archer, The Lost Order Kevin: Assassin, The Lost Order Rehu: Hunter, The Lost Order? Uses dark Magic Korgot: Super strong villager with a dark secret, Hates Ekimu Tarin: Korgot's friend. Helps him manage his anger Nilkuu: Main Character, The Lost Order Varkuu: Nilkuu's Father Vizuna: Nilkuu's Friend and Partner, Joins Nilkuu in The Lost Order Kivoda: Vizuna's Best Friend, Okotian Magic Narmoto: Karnu Village Leader Ekimu: Supposed Info-broker Part 2 Tsoyo: Demon General Zaron: God of Creation Kiido: "The Messenger" "Father": God of Devastation Tahu: God of Fire Onua: God of Earth Kopaka: God of Ice Pohatu: God of Stone/Sand Lewa: God of Air/Nature Gali: Goddess of Water Makuta: God of Darkness Part 3 Iz: Next ruler of Okoto, Main "Villain" Fernon: Knight of One Kulta: Knight of Two Gitzen: Knight of Three Surge: Knight of Four UNKNOWN: Knight of Five UNKNOWN: Knight of Six Fett: Iz's Personal Knight Burk: Motorcyclist and Heavy cannon user, Side unknown Part 4 Veazey: Strange Knight who goes by no one's command and helps all who needs help Spirit of Nathaniel Evo: One of the members of the Rebel Law Spirit of Tora Huru: One of the members of the Rebel Law Part Final Mata Nui: God of Life Renzari: Zaron's Brother, God of War Edited December 12, 2017 by Renzari Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nescent Posted November 16, 2015 Share Posted November 16, 2015 The first chapter was really intense! I admit the formatting made it difficult to read, since you capitalized every word. I like how assertive the characters are, especially Korgot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renzari Posted November 16, 2015 Author Share Posted November 16, 2015 The first chapter was really intense! I admit the formatting made it difficult to read, since you capitalized every word. I like how assertive the characters are, especially Korgot.I fixed that and thanks! I am glad you liked it! And I hope you get ready for Part 2!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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