EDIT: Just so you know, this is a re-post from old BZP. I have 7 chapters written, which I'll be posting within the next few days before any new material.
Right, well, I seriously doubt anyone here remembers the old DQ... it was almost a year ago now. Anyway, I only finished five chapters of it, and to be frank; it sucked. So I tried to re-write the chapters with better grammar and story, but I only ever got the prologue re-written, which still wasn't all that great. My previous epic, before DQ, I also never finished. So, I'm determined to finish this one.I really don't expect anyone to read it, but it's more for my piece of mind athan anything. I'm not a very strong writer, so I'm trying extra hard for these. Hope someone enjoys it.Anyway, the basic plot is centered around a De-Matoran named Xinlo, and his adventures throughout Murtua (a planet me, Iro, and venom created. This is in the same continuity as Iro's Fractures, Shattering, and Forgotten epics). Of course, he becomes a Toa, but I haven't worked all that out yet, so yeah. No details.Here's the epic.Oh, and credit to Cicle/Tahu(Onua)~Of~The~Swamp for the name. He came up with it ages ago. =/ ALSO credit to Zokau, who coined the name 'Deax-Nui'.Hope whoever reads this enjoys it.Characters: (I'll post pics as they are introduced)Xinlo (Zinn-loh)Kara (Kay-rah)Teltus (Tell-tuhs)Nari (Nah-ree)/Oteyla (Ah-tay-lah)Volskith (Vahl-skith)Zarzoz (Zahr-zohs)
Edited by Xinlo: Spirit Of Sonics, Oct 21 2011 - 05:09 PM.