Posted Oct 02 2012 - 12:47 AM
you who tempt the fates
you have journeyed oh so far
to apparitions in the haze
rise up, you earth bound demons
rise up before me now and fight
your time has finally come
Posted Oct 02 2012 - 09:44 AM
'Cuz every girl's crazy 'bout
a sharp-dressed man
Posted Oct 02 2012 - 09:36 PM
Best sentences in the whole thing. You might want to include more of this improve the clarity of the emotions :PKeep up the…interesting…work.
He was angry…It made him angry.
Edited by Paleo, Oct 02 2012 - 09:36 PM.
Posted Oct 03 2012 - 01:00 AM
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