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What Can Be Lost Review


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#1 Offline Master Inika

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Posted Oct 15 2011 - 01:27 PM

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Review for What Can Be Lost. Constructive criticism only.


Edited by Master Inika, Oct 15 2011 - 01:29 PM.

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#2 Offline Allanon Loke

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Posted Oct 15 2011 - 06:43 PM

Oooh, a mysterious, ancient treasure hunt. Good prologue. It's nice to have the main characters at least introduced in the beginning. Nice start.
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