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#1 Offline Toajaller1

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Posted Nov 08 2012 - 04:14 PM

Feel free to post anything you want about to the story. Ill post a new chapter every couple of days so make sure to check for it. I hope you like it! Update: tahu's mission will be the first part of a trilogy. Keep your eyes open when tahus misdion is over for 1 the war of spherus magna2 the mata nui quest(and sorry for any spelling/grammer errors i have no computer so i type it on my ipod and it doesn't always show errors)One more thing. When I add more to te story, I dont make a new post. I just paste it onto whats already there. Sorry for any confusion

Edited by Toajaller1, Nov 25 2012 - 05:40 PM.

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#2 Offline KyloHasStrongNeckMuscles

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Posted Nov 09 2012 - 01:57 PM

I just want to say, I really like you writing style.I love Tahu's character as well. The only thing is, is, that you need to put an enter in every time a new person talks, as it gets confusing at times.Keep up the good work.
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#3 Offline Toajaller1

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Posted Nov 09 2012 - 04:17 PM

Yeah i dont have a computer so i type everything on my ipod so thats why it doesnt enter. When i copy and paste it
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#4 Offline KyloHasStrongNeckMuscles

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Posted Nov 09 2012 - 07:45 PM

Yeah i dont have a computer so i type everything on my ipod so thats why it doesnt enter. When i copy and paste it

Oh I see. That sucks

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