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The Gundaru Nui Saga Review Topic

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#1 Offline JacobLazer

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Posted May 15 2013 - 12:00 PM

This is the review topic for my fanficton series, The Gundaru Nui Saga.  If you have anything to say about the story, please reply to this topic!


Edited by JacobLazer, May 16 2013 - 09:50 AM.

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#2 Offline ToaDraconixMahvi

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Posted Jun 17 2013 - 03:12 PM

Make book 3...and yo left one and two with a cliffhanger! Fix that please?
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#3 Offline The Forgotten Warrior

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Posted Jun 20 2013 - 06:05 PM

Okay, I see one flaw that you made when you made this review topic, and that's that there is no link to the story. I highly suggest you do that. Thank you.


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#4 Offline JacobLazer

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Posted Jan 29 2014 - 12:26 PM

requesting close


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#5 Offline Ldd2000

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Posted May 02 2014 - 04:14 PM

are you going to make a book 3??


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