The concept for that story sounds excellent, especially how it seems to carry a message while also sounding like a generally interesting read. I'm sure you'll do well, despite the procrastination.

I agree with Laughin'Man: That's one cool premise. Did you take any inspiration from Asimov's work? And do you think you'll be posting the story on BZPower sometime after it's turned in?

I can post it if you guys want. You know, when it's finished.

And actually, I'm not much of a reader. I don't think I've ever willingly read an entire book. Inspiration came from an idea for short film that I have which was itself inspired by Tempbot, a short film by Neill Blomkamp.

That'd be cool, yeah. I'm interested in reading it.

And that's kind of funny considering, y'know, Twilight Sparkle.. =P

I am irony! >=D

I just got my last project back, a sci-fi descriptive essay. I'll post that here in the meantime while I finalize this one.