Creepy right-hand block is creepy.

I guess y?

Your OC seems to suffer from the very common problem of over-saturation.

No pony is that vibrantly neon in the show, and it makes no sense for yours to be either.

OC = original character.

Vibrant neon my plot.

I may create a version without my OC, if enough people would prefer that.

She looks so angry in all the pics.

I wonder is somepony was bothering her? :U

Maybe..