It doesn't look that bad to me, to be honest. I'll admit the axe made me thought it was part of the arm at first, but that was just because of my monitor being weird, as it usually is. =P(It shows things brighter at one end of the screen, compared to the other end, which is darker. =P)

Not bad! I'm loving the beard and mustache. The main thing that caught my eye was the torso. It seemed a bit off at first (maybe he's really taller than a Dwarf should be? I have no idea), but I think it looks a bit too neat. I think there should be more wrinkles and a few details in there. Still, it's a neat sketch (an my sketches tend to be of lower quality and sometimes stick figures doing silly things).

looks pretty good, but the nose should be bigger. xD

...love those noses.