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I Messed Up


Seranikai

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Firstly, I've added a nice little profile just on the left there. Now...

 

Bad Seran. Naughty Seran.

 

From my first book:

 

Dark drew a long, thin black sword seemingly from thin air, blocking the attack with ease. He glared at Nakiah, his eyes flickering red.

“You cannot defeat me,” he snarled; a pair of tattered, dragon-like wings unfurled from his back, and he rose into the air.

 

I checked my character database, and he's only meant to have one wing, the other being mechanical. :( Now I've got to go through the entire first book and change every mention of his wings.

 

The vaguely ironic thing - I remember the first draft mentioned that he only had one wing, but for some reason I changed it to two. Every description after that says two.

 

Bad Seran. Naughty Seran.

 

-Seran

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Go sit in the corner and think about what you've done.

 

Why don't you have "breathing in your likes?How can you not like breathing?

 

I do like breathing, certainly...just not enough to rank it in my Likes.

 

-Seran

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