Nice!

Helryx sounds important. Dunno who he/she/it is, but the name rocks. I wonder if Helryx was in BL10? Guess i'll have to wait until i read it or the spoiler-barrier is lifted.

and...

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#faints#

(used spoilers so the plot of the mini-story isn't completely ruined )

Look at it this way all you matoroists. MATORO AINT DEAD!!!!

For some reason the code still does not work for me

The code isn't working. Could somebody PM me with the story in the PM?

OK, can anyone give me the PDF link of "The Kingdom" PLEASE!?! The code doesn't work for me!

It won't work for me either. What's going on?

Wait. It works now. Boy, it's a good story. It's weird, though. Spoiler removed: please see the spoiler policy. Wonder what elements are they?

I know who removed is. But I'd rather not say it yet.

I read the story. Awesome. I don't know if it's allowed to post the link to the story, so I won't. And yes, how did the Mahri return to Metru Nui if Matoro didn't complete his mission, Greg?

I read the story. Awesome. I don't know if it's allowed to post the link to the story, so I won't. And yes, how did the Mahri return to Metru Nui if Matoro didn't complete his mission, Greg?

 

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Spoiler removed. YAY THANKS GREG KAPURA ROCKS KAPURA IS MY FAVE MATORAN FROM MNOLG HE ROCKS (translated: Yay! Thanks Greg! Kapura rocks! Kapura is my favorite Matoran from MNOLG! He rocks!)

 

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They probably just went back up to Voya Nui and Axonn got them off the island somehow.

It was great so far, can't wait for the second part.

It says code doesn't exist.

I liked that Stroy a lot! XD It went out of fashion 10,000 years ago. XD

Where do you type in the code?

Sounds good, but "Power Lance"? I know your target audience is about eleven years old, but that's pushing it. I would have found that a bit cheap at eleven. How about "Nova Lance"? I wouldn't want to get stabbed by THAT. But it does sound pretty cool for a short story, so I'll probably get round to reading it at some point.

"Power lance" is the name agreed to by Billund for the weapon -- I can't call it something other than what it is being called in Shop At Home copy and on the web, etc.

Greg

I found it ineresting, and a good little story

Great story. It gave me chills.

edit:took down the Kingdom info after i learned of the ban

-SK

where do you go to the site to type in the code?

Kanoka Club.

So, in order to get the 2nd part, which will be up sometimes later, we need another code, right?

I believe greg said part 2 is supposed to be up later this week.

It says that the code does not exist or comes up with an error page