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Not really, but definatly a good idea! But what do you mean by 'pelvis'?

Oooooh...

I see, and I have an idea how to. But it will just be blocky...

It's the last stage for Velox's contest. I think I can post it, since I will probably change it.

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EDIT: I forgot to add: It will have a mechanical left hand.

@Veq: Ooh. It's gonna have wings? The lower legs seems skinny in comparison to the other parts of the legs.

 

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Haven't decided if to give it wings. The other stages have wings, but I'll see if I can come up of something clever.

About the legs, I usually do them so. Dunno why really. They give it a more demonish feel.

@Kaji: The section between the pelvis sand the upper torso is too long.

@ Veq: Very nice. Looks awesome.

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Veg: What colours are you using? To mee, it seems like you use lime-green, Mata green, Metru green, silver, Metru grey and black. Maybe use less colours.

Also, the armour on the knees/lower legs has a too big gasp.

Luz: So I should make the torso shorter by one stud?

@Kaji: Perhaps, but maybe you could ditch the tire section if it doesn't make you have to redesign the entire thing.

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Luz: I'm rebuilding it, so we'll see how it turns out.

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I changed most of the black bits to blue and added a real tail. I don't know if I will finish the other half though. It's a Bahrag.

~BD~

@Primus- Yeah I made a real one with some takadox armor, but I need to bulk it up a bit.

~BD~

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Front I plan to add grids to the front to cover the (oooo)

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BD: I hope you know that there needs to be a bigger half attached ot the thing you have already made.

And I see that by the Piraka armour, to the sides of the upper legs, that there is a rod sticking out. I don't like that.

Luz: I still have no idea what a mecha is, but that doesn't matter right now. The upper legs are too big, from top to buttom. Reducing it to ust 3 studs would be nice.

@Kaji: A mecha is a non-piloted battle vehicle. [?] Only 3 studs high? I'll see what I can do.

@Primus: I plan to fix the layering; I couldn't find the right pieces in some areas. I already deeplinked it, didn't I? I know I 'd it at first, but I changed it right after I posted.

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BD: I hope you know that there needs to be a bigger half attached ot the thing you have already made.

And I see that by the Piraka armour, to the sides of the upper legs, that there is a rod sticking out. I don't like that.

-Kaji

LOL, yeah I know about the other half. As for the rod, it holds his leg up. Just like the ones for Hydraxon and Axxon. I just had to deal with it. Unless you know a way to fix it.

~BD~

BD: I hope you know that there needs to be a bigger half attached ot the thing you have already made.

And I see that by the Piraka armour, to the sides of the upper legs, that there is a rod sticking out. I don't like that.

-Kaji

 

LOL, yeah I know about the other half. As for the rod, it holds his leg up. Just like the ones for Hydraxon and Axxon. I just had to deal with it. Unless you know a way to fix it.

 

~BD~

No, but you could add a (+O+) piece under the armour.

Okay, things are a bit odd here XD.

~BD~: I like it, but the leg has too many free plus rods sticking out. The upper leg side armour looks awkward. It looks like it's with, like, 2 studs back from the rest of the leg. The body is great.

Luz: Thanks.

Those are the feet? Looks pretty mecha-ish, the fact that you used mainly Technic pieces adds more to that effect. Maybe add some armour to make them lean. Also, is the rod just temporary? It's a bit too long.

Kaji: Yeah, I'm off with the colour layering. But I wanted a reptilian-ish look, that's why I used those many shades of green. The black and silver are from the original character, as this is a mutated form. And where's the grey? I said it has a left mechanical hand, but other than that and some small bits...

Pretty good. As other said. fix the pelvis/tire from the upper body and you're good. Do you have a smaller tire?

Shadow Leech: Is Chirox's body custom? I can't see well. It's great anyway. The arms are good, I know because I used them too. But I would rather get rid of the wings on the upper arm, or turn them around. The feet are well, but you might want to use Hordika legs with a joint as upper legs an Piraka legs as lower legs. It would look better.

Your Chirox looks almost exactly as my revamp, but without the custom body. .

Phew, that was hard...

Veg: You used grey by the shoulder and feet.

I have removed the tire now. Im trying to find some other I can use, but it's not sure if I will use them.