Hertlaka I believe this one is from November of 07

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Hm, how does one join this club?

You can PM me a resume containing your b-shelf. I'll add you if you want. This entries meant for discussing Older MOCs.

@Leechy: Hmm, yes, other than the red axles, he is pretty good. He seems empty near his torso, though.

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These two guys. May 2008 I think. Got third place in Cap'n Kopaka's blog contest, but the topic is empty.

Luz: Put some armour here and there and it'll be great. Also, either remove the black or put more of it. And ditch the white Borohk eyes.

Shadow Leech: The lower torso is a bit too empty, and the colors are too jumbled. Ditch the tourqoise.

@Veq: Tied for third, didn't they? Anyways, I like the humanoid's torso, though it looks a little skinny in the middle. I'm not too fond of the other one. It's got way too many spikes and stuff, and it looks a little jumbled.

 

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I reserve this for future Old-MOCs.

That's okay, right?

Yes, it is.

Hau

Tohu

That's all for now.

Lokos nice, Distorded. The Hau seems a little stout, though.

Tohu looks really good. Mouth seems to come out too far, but it's a better job than I could've done.

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This was my winning entry for Ca'gerrin's Self-Moc contest. I don't think I ever got any comments on it. Probably because I didn't make a topic....

-K-

@ The Alchemyst: The Ram: Its good. The colour scheme is well spread out, and the overall look is good. How ever I don't like the Visorak feet on the upper legs. They look a bit out of place there. The weapon is simple but good.

Mantax: Very nice. The colour scheme is good and ditching the grey was a good thing. I realy like the pincers and the torso. Both are very well done. The only things I don't like are the Rahkshii feet, but that's just personal opinion. I always find them ugly. It's a good MOC overall.

@((Primus)): Void: A very good creation. It is very visually appealing, as wel as being custom. The tentacles give it a nice feel and the wings are very good.

Juggernaut: Good. The head is well done. The torso looks amazing and so do the upper arms. The weapon is very nice. The only problem I have is the left lower arm which looks too skinny.

Rorak: Very nice, one of the better Rahi I've seen. The overall construction is well taught out and appealing. My favourite part about it are probably the wings.

Orahklas: Besides it being a MOC of one of my best friends on BZP, it is great. It's well constructed but the lower arms seem to be too big. The colourscheme is well balanced but perhaps could use an extra silver piece or two on the torso. The upper arms are very well done.

OK, here are some of mine:

First Self-MOC

Third Self-MOC (The gold doesn't stand out as much in real life. That and the gold was part of the story, which was latter scrapped)

Kerena

Tahu Nuva

This post will be updated at a later date.

Okay here's a bunch of mine:

-Zevrahn

-Vaedrax

-Xydaiac V2 (Prisoner 118)

-Xel (The winged matoran)

More to come?

@Zevrahn: Strikes me as somewhat blocky, reminiscent of Konames style. I think the rahkshi heads could be replaced with something different. There's a sensory overload that comes with looking at this. You included too many types of blue. Narrow that down if you can. I'd also add some depth to the feet.

@Xydaiac: I'd shorten up the left arm, and try to bulk up the head, but other than that it's really good.

@Xel: I like the transparent red as a detail color, but I would've given him red eyes. And I like the use of the bohrok foot as a lower leg.

Anyway: Candle

Shroudspawn

Steam-Punk Willie

Kitkamu

Hapori Tohu

This was my BBC44 entry and my first successful fusion MOC. It got a mediocre amount of posts and I would've liked a little bit more feed back. Note: I upgraded his torso and reduced its fragility, but it doesn't look physically different so I didn't bother taking new pics.

I have some more but I'll add them later.

If I want to review another person's MOC do I have to edit my post and write it here? Or do I create a new post?

@ Prophet: Your candle MOC is a nice concept creation and you've utilized all those hip joints very well. I think it would be better representation of candle though, if you had made the body of the candle white, and tried to somehow show it in the process of melting. Perhaps more piece variation would help achieve that goal.

Shroudspawn, is very imposing MOC, the borok head really suits it nicely. However, the placement of the silver slizer foot and other piece (I have no idea what the term for it is) obstructs the head. I recommend removing the slizer foot or at least the other part and moving the head forward. The color distribution is very well done. The shoulders look kind of blocky and I don’t like the upper arms design.

@ Primus: Thanks for the clarification. I chose the gears behind HT's head because I wanted them for their yellow/orange coloring, and I felt that they fit my rendering of HT. They can easily be changed though. I guess it really more matter of opinion on which gear is more aesthetically pleasing. Yeah I don't really like the blockiness of the torso my self. That’s why I game him a cape to cover up his back. Do you have any suggestions for building fusion torsos? Torsos are the parts of MOCs I find most difficult to construct. I can never get them in quite the right shape.

My favorite part of Robocop is his torso. You integrated the cordak blaster seamlessly and it adds a lot to his butt kicking demeanor. Nice touch with the barraki eyes as "police lights". What's the deal with the "horn" on the back of his head? It seems unnecessary and doesn't add anything to the MOC, I recommend removing it. His legs and arms seem short compared to such a large torso; perhaps you could give them an upgrade?