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I'm not going to lie, I just don't like it. I can't find a single thing I really enjoy about it.

Perhaps you could try and point out what you don't like, and then he could make some changes based on your dislikes. :notsure:

 

 

 

 

 

-D-

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I'm not going to lie, I just don't like it. I can't find a single thing I really enjoy about it.

Perhaps you could try and point out what you don't like, and then he could make some changes based on your dislikes. :notsure:

 

 

-D-

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I'm not going to lie, I just don't like it. I can't find a single thing I really enjoy about it.

Perhaps you could try and point out what you don't like, and then he could make some changes based on your dislikes. :notsure:

 

 

-D-

cmav.jpg

 

:plain:

 

 

 

 

-D-

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I'm not going to lie, I just don't like it. I can't find a single thing I really enjoy about it.

Perhaps you could try and point out what you don't like, and then he could make some changes based on your dislikes. :notsure:

-D-

Shapes don't fit together, the colours are alright, but the form and placement thereof is lacking. The MOC lacks visual cohesion, and too much of this MOC relies on being 'different!' that the overall form, shape, and aesthetic value suffer.

 

In short: Too much going on everywhere. Take the ideas here and turn them into five different MOCs.

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Lotta colors never looked so good. =D

Thanks.

 

I like it, but I am not a fan of the diving board chest.

Hmmm.... That seems to be the opinion of a lot of people.

 

I told you my thoughts. But I forgot em.

I kinda did too.

 

I'm not going to lie, I just don't like it. I can't find a single thing I really enjoy about it.

Perhaps you could try and point out what you don't like, and then he could make some changes based on your dislikes. :notsure:

-D-

cmav.jpg

:plain:

-D-

No, see, I think he wants me to turn it into that. Man, that'd be sweet....

 

I like it, but the back is kinda cluttered.

True. Maybe I'll clean it up a little.

 

I'm not going to lie, I just don't like it. I can't find a single thing I really enjoy about it.

Perhaps you could try and point out what you don't like, and then he could make some changes based on your dislikes. :notsure:

-D-

Shapes don't fit together, the colours are alright, but the form and placement thereof is lacking. The MOC lacks visual cohesion, and too much of this MOC relies on being 'different!' that the overall form, shape, and aesthetic value suffer.

 

In short: Too much going on everywhere. Take the ideas here and turn them into five different MOCs.

Hmm... I'll try to keep that in mind for my next MOCs. Don't think I'll have enough time to change this one.

 

Good luck, Laka. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

-D-

Thanks. I'll need it....

-K-

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I actually think the position of the blue guns around the orange piece makes it look like it has eyes, so it has this funny expression on his face. :lol:

 

But yeah, I would remove at least two of the transparent colors, and the bits of blue and magenta on other parts of his body. Red and white looks good though. Personally I'd keep the orange so that he can have the propulsor on his back, so you should change the orange piece on his face to the kind found on a Rahkshi.

 

~B~

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