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Blue Mocs 2nd Chances Contest ( Bionicle Paracosmos Contest #3)


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Alright, here's the theme I decided on for the next blog contest. This is another 2nd Chances contest and a New MOCs contest. It's the third Paracosmos contest -- winning MOCs will be in my fanfics. Yadda. So what's the dealio wit' da themeo?

Make a blue MOC. Any blue MOC.

It can be a hero, a villain, a morally-questionable, a beast, a titan, a small MOC, anything, as long as it is blue.

The top four winning MOCs will be featured in my next Paracosmos story, Endless Blue (during Bohrok Saga, telling of a sailing voyage from Mata Nui into the Endless Ocean).

Other winning entries could be used anywhere else in later stories, including Bara Magna stories. (I do think I'll tell some stories there eventually, though that will be after the main BP story arc ends.)

For anybody that isn't aware, the BP is my adventure mystery fanfic series, with epics, short stories, and an RPG; all of those that are online listed here (or they will be whenever I get around to adding Twisted Island :P).

Basic Setup

Bionicle Paracosmos Epic #5: Endless Blue, (BP Episode #10) will feature at least four winning MOCs from this contest.

The title has multiple meanings, but one of them is the fact that there are mysteriously so many more blue characters in the Paracosmos than there are officially. No other color has this effect, and it's one of the big clues as to the nature of the Paracosmos's origins.

My main character, a white and silver reptilian Toa-sized being named Bhukasa, is the last surviving member of an ancient race (as revealed in Captain of Treason). He was a ship-merchant at the time of Metru Nui; he was away when disaster struck his home island. He came to Mata Nui with the Turaga and Matoran and lived there for 300 years.

Then he got curious -- is the Endless Ocean truly endless? Well between you and me, it's not -- there are other islands in the Paracosmos. :P He sailed out to investigate, and disappeared for 700 years. In Captain of Treason (2001 story), he returned, but his memory was totally gone.

In Endless Blue he will begin to get his memory back in the form of flashbacks while exploring the truth of an enemy that strikes Mata Nui at this time. On his journey, he will meet characters he knew from these 700 years that are still out there on these islands. Rahi or other types of beasts can be included. Many of them will be blue.

So this is where you come in. :)

Note that the origins of these beings can be from anywhere. So you can enter Bara Magna characters and they can still win; it's just that I'll have to have some reason why they got transferred to the Endless Ocean planet recently. I do in fact have a standard reason lined up -- the enemy that rules the Endless Seas have teleportation powers available to them, which can have a degree of randomness attached and no distance limit. They can randomly reach out and draw a being from just about anywhere to them.

Winners beyond the first four may or may not be used in EB. If not, they will be used elsewhere in the Paracosmos series.

Regardless of where they're used, credit will be given to you, the MOCer. :)

Rules:

1) The MOC must "be blue." I'm not going to define percentages; if you use other colors like red or whatever they should be "mostly" blue, but if you use a lot of grayscale colors you can use less blue. (So black, gray, silver wouldn't count.) Use your judgement.

2) Enter up to three MOCs per member. You can enter both categories but only three total MOCs allowed.

3) Past BBC entries or past MOCs go in category 1 (2nd Chances). Please link to the MOC's topic or something else with a date attached. Anything else goes in the New MOCs category.

4) Do not enter BBC-winning MOCs. Only non-winners (that's why it's called 2nd Chances).

5) Past MOCs must have been made before January 20, 2009.

6) Only enter your own MOCs, though you can ask others if they'd like to enter a MOC they've made.

7) Follow all BZPower rules.

8) I pick winners, but will listen to any "nominating" comments you make for someone else.

9) No set number of winners; will depend on how many enter, and overall quality of entries. Four will almost certainly be in Endless Blue, but I won't rule out using more in it. (This is only because I already have a big cast of side characters for EB and I don't wanna overdo it; I'll only be able to judge this as I write it.)

10) Oh, and don't enter MOCs from the last Bones Blog MOC contest. :P

Entry Form:

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Category: 
MOC Name: 
Topic: 
Moral Type: 
Species Type: 
Bio:



Explanation:
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Category: [2nd Chances, or New MOC]

MOC Name: [You can go with an English nickname style, a Bionicle name, whatnot. Try googling Bionicle-style ones to make sure there aren't any (or many) uses of it already if you have time.]

Topic: [link to topic for 2nd Chances category to prove they're old MOCs, link for new MOCs for MOC discussion yadda]

Moral Type: [Hero, Villain, Questionable, "Citizen" (as in, not a hero with powers), Beast, Whatever (as in, you let me decide :P). You can use your own wording.]

Species Type: [Existing official/BP species, mutant, or species you make up. A "Bionicle-style" species name is optional but at least say it's a new species for such cases. Also, "Whatever" works here too; I'll judge based on the MOC mostly.]

Bio: [powers, backstory if you want, etc. Again I will judge mostly based on the MOC; I can fill in details, but bios help me figure out how I could use the character.]

Categories

1) 2nd Chances -- old MOCs, especially old entries in BBC contests that didn't win.

2) New MOCs -- either made for this contest or made after January 20 2009.

Notes

(You can skip this if its length annoys you.)

1) No preference will be given to either category this time. Of the four that will definately be in Endless Blue, two will be from each category.

2) I might wanna modify the descriptions somewhat for Epic 5 or for future BP story; will ask enterer for permission if so, though.

3) As in the first BP MOC contest, only one of your three MOCs can win. However, I might have "Parawins" (honorable mentions) that might get cameos in the Paracosmos too.

4) Note that I like non-humanoids. But preference for this contest will be given to the best MOC (in my and Ojhilom's judgement, and we try to be objective), so humanoids are fair game. Even Matoran are allowed. :)

The rest of these notes are slightly spoilers and are long so into the tags they go; just some storyline and setting tidbits for Endless Blue that might help you decide what to enter:

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5) The main type of location in Endless Blue your characters are likely to be in has this description: A mysterious enemy known only by their name -- Kuambu -- captures beings and imprisons them on tiny islands that dot the Endless Ocean Planet's surface. These islands tend to be tall pillars whose coasts are high cliffs. At the bases of the cliffs there are narrow pebble beaches.

The pillar tops are forested, with grass and smaller plants fairly thick between the medium-sized trees. Primitive wooden fences border the tops, and power nulling effect prevent powers from being used on the fences (the wood itself has that power). Each island is divided into one section labeled "Darkminds" and one section labeled "Lightminds". In truth, however, many on both sides are morally questionable, and it's possible that sorting mistakes may have happened.

Each island has a tunnel from the beach to the forest prison areas, but a special gate much like the one Takanuva couldn't pass through to Karzahni allows only Kuambu in. From time to time, the Kuambu arrive in white-sailed ships, and they come up and hunt their prisoners in these places. Afterwards, all memories of the appearance and powers of the Kuambu are erased, but memories of the feeling of being hunted and certain glimpses of the battle are not erased, just to reinforce fear.

6) There is also a large island with mutagenic sands (mentioned with some of the winners of the last contest) called Kriitunga Island. Kriitunga tend to be Matoran-sized with birdlike conical heads (my MOCs use a backwards Metru head with a ballsocket piece as the mouth in place of the Metru brain) and claws. But the sands mutate many to look quite different (their town in the center of the island, and a river that goes from there to the coast are the only non-mutagenic areas. You could enter Kriitunga mutants to live on this island. There is a Kuambu Hunting Pen here as well, along the river, and they raid the island often.

The mutagenic sands can affect both form and powers, BTW.

Standard blue Kriitunga are of the element Ocean -- they can heal wooden sailing vessels, breath water, and make tiny amounts of water. Usually blue and brown in color. White Kriitunga tend to be white and iceblue. Their standard powers I'm saving for the reveal in later chapters of Twisted Island, but mutated ones can have any power. :)

7) There are also a few medium-sized islands, some with pens and others just grown wild where the Kuambu raid sometimes. Most of these I haven't set in stone, so yall can do what you want here. :)

8) Note that in general both genders exist with any color/element in the Paracosmos. One exception: All Ocean Kriitunga are female, and all others are male (however a mutant male Kriitunga might become blue in his color scheme, and the white ones tend to have iceblue in them). With blue Matoran/Toa characters either gender works, and same with other species.

Fun Fact: The above note is another hint to the BP origins.

Another hint: Notice which number that note has -- eight.

9) In your bios you can say how they ended up in Kuambu territory if you want, but if you win lower down and I don't use it in EB I might move them somewhere else (ex: if you enter a Bara Magnan and say he got teleported here I might not use that part, so they'd still be on Bara Magna waiting for future storyline use). I reserve the right to edit that part of bios sans permission (though I'll probably ask for it anyways heh).

10) For purposes of EB story, sliiiight preference will be given to the morally questionable characters. They're more mysterious and there's more I can do with them in the storyline. But again judging will be mostly based on MOC.


Methinks that's all; post any questions yall've got.

Entry Period

Begins now, ends April 28th (that's a Tuesday) at noon EST.

Essentially three months. :)

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Does this have enough blue? Or is it too black?

-M-

This one acceptable, bones sir? (Pieces are from the Technic Super Battle Droid.)

Yes to both.

Sweet. I'll take some pics and then fill out the entry form.

-M-

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That's a long deadline...

 

Well, can't wait to see more entries. And where is Makaru and that Fanglyfuss?

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Link.

And a gallery.

 

Category: New MOC

MOC Name: Torkax (cheesy, I know)

Topic: Here.

Moral Type: A guardian of sorts. So, I think questionable.

Species Type: Whatever.

Bio: He guards... something. I'll let you decide if it wins. :)

 

Yes, I'm not too good with stories.

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Category: 2nd Chances

MOC Name: Blue (agent name, like Guardian or Ancient)

Topic: Heah

Moral Type: Questionable

Species Type: Whatever

Bio: Whatever. It's female, though. =)

 

I'll edit this with another, probably.

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I don`t have many blue MOCs, but this will do.

 

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Category: Old MOC.

MOC Name: Heria

Topic: Heria

Moral Type: Citzen.

Species Type: repaired matoran.

Bio: whatever you want.

 

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Category: New MOC.

MOC Name: Heria

Topic: Not made yet.

Moral Type: Beast

Species Type: repaired matoran.

Bio: Strong. Agressive. Can fly short distances.

 

 

Maxilos.Bolso

 

 

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Category: New MOC

MOC Name: Johke (pronounced JAH-kah)

Topic: none. Blog entry more win.

Moral Type: Questionable. (Will fight heroes or villains.)

Species Type: Steltian (is that a species?)

Bio: Forged his own weapons, morally questionable... see Topic for more.

 

I hope this is blue enough... the mix of colors is supposed to be symbolic.

 

 

EDIT: PLEASE READ. The last two pics in the gallery show him with claws. You can ignore the claws or not, I took the pictures over a period of two days had added them as an afterthought. They don't affect his moral type or his species type. *facepalm*

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Awesome contest here Bones. I'm gonna enter as soon as I take some pictures. I've been saving a MOC for a while and it happens to be blue... Just about entirely blue...

 

Color based MOCs are very fun to do... And blue has quite a few odd shades that I've been collecting and saving for such a time as this >=P

 

Yup, expect my entry soon.

 

//.Tek

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Category: New MOC

MOC Name: Saeltar

Topic: Will edit once posted (Gallery, once public)

Moral Type: Assassin

Species Type: Whatever, Haven't thought up anything yet.

Bio: Assassin. Poisoned blades. Cold, Kinda like Mazeka, but closer to the "evil" side. Will do anything for enough money, or if it puts him in a good postion. Very logical, kind of like Kopaka. Oh, and Mantax quoted him on the "No friends only Enemies that I haven't killed yet" thing. :P

That's it. I still have that 1'4" tall Blue humaniod that I need to take pics of, and an old MOC once I get around to linking everything.

Good luck all!!!

-M-

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Okay, my entry is finally uploaded =D

 

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[Click for a (much) bigger image] (Yes, That is Metal Blue =P )

[Brickshelf] or [Flickr]

(Brickshelf has more but isn't public yet...)

 

Category: New MOC

MOC Name: Blue Guardian [Erm I don't really have one but go with Blue Guardian for now. You can Change it if you want... =P ]

Topic: None [At the Moment that is...]

Moral Type: "Whatever", but probably more along the lines of neutral/hero.

Species Type: "Whatever," again. =P

Bio: A lone Guardian guarding a very important secret/treasure. He's noble and moral, but works alone. He's suspicious and only trusts himself...

 

You can make him either a captive like you described, Bones (in that case he is trying to escape to get back and guard his treasure/secret/whatever), or you can have him as some character your protagonist(s) run into. (you know, for some reason they need what this guy is protecting and have to challenge him for it or something. It really is up to you) =D

 

Anyway, Good contest, Bones =D

 

(I may try and put together another MOC but we'll see.. =P )

 

//.Tek

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Category: Old MOC

Name: Sikara

Topic: Here

Moral Type: Dark Hunter. Ruthless. Evil

Species Type: Lariska's species. Thius isn't How I'd picture Lariska, but there can be deifferences within species. Compare Pohatu Phantoka and Lewa Phantoka.

Bio: A ruthless, determined dark hunter who will stop at nothing to get what she wants. Was fused with a Zatth at one point, can now summon rahi within a limited distance. Can also control them.

Has limited control over the "poison" power.

Now for pics of my last blue entry...

-M-

 

 

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Category: 2nd Chances.

Name: Knife-Tail. (It's an awful name. Feel free to come up with a new one if you don't like this name.)

Topic: I didn't make a topic, but I did enter this MOC in BBC 41. I'm entry number 246.

Moral type: Whatever you want, Bones. I've always imagined it as a troubled hero, but it's up to you.

Species type: Whatever.

Bio: None.

 

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Category: 2nd Chances.

Name: Nui-Keras.

Topic: Here.

Moral type: Beast (pretty much neutral, in other words).

Species type: Rahi.

Bio: The Nui Keras is a large crab normally found in the deep, murky waters surrounding Mahri Nui. It is apparently of the same species as ordinary Keras coral crabs, but it has adapted to its deep sea environment (possibly as a result of the mutagen in the water). Though tough and resiliant, the Nui Keras is too slow and heavy for combat.

 

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Category: 2nd Chances.

Name: Gahlok Va.

Topic: The orignial topic was seemingly eaten by the server some time ago. Hopefully this topic will be proof enough.

Moral type: I would say 'questionable', but it's up to you.

Species type: Bohrok Va

Bio: None. It's just a regular ol' Gahlok Va. (And that's not a third eye, it's a mouth light thingy. :D)

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I'm in.

 

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Category: New MOC

MOC Name: Razor Cat

Topic: Blue MOCs

Moral Type: Beast

Species Type: Ummm…Razor Cat?

Height: (All fours) 5ft (Standing) 8ft

Bio: The Razor Cat is a large cat species native to the island of the Ekieigo. This species of feline is unusual because of its protruding spikes and hardened fur. It has a whip-like tail used to stun prey and as a weapon in tribe battles. The Ekieigo use the cubs as equivalents to attack dogs, and the full grown cats as mounts. Each litter contains four to six cubs, and through a bind spell, are bonded to one Ekieigo on the day of their birth.

 

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Category: New MOC

MOC Name: Ekieigo

Topic: Blue MOCs

Moral Type: Neutral

Species Type: Ekieigo

Height: Approx. 6 ft

Bio: The Ekieigo are a species of sapient humanoid reptiles that inhabit an uncharted island in Kuambu territory. They are a tribe-based society headed by a single chiefein, and are primarily based on war culture. The many tribes scattered across the island constantly feud over borders as each of them tries to expand their territory. They have limited technology, but they excel in chemical warfare. Many of their spears contain a vessel of poison that drips out onto the blade tip and they spray clouds of poisonous gases in battle to weaken enemy soldiers. Each Ekieigo is bonded mentally to a Razor Cat at birth by a shamen, becoming lifelong companions. If an Ekieigo or Razor Cat is killed, the remaining creature is drained of all spirit and they become emotionless for the rest of their life.

 

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Category: New MOC

MOC Name: R’yn

Topic: Blue MOCs

Moral Type: Questionable, possibly leaning very very slightly to good.

Species Type: Unknown

Height: 5.5 ft

Bio: R’yn is a fierce mercenary specializing in stealthy assassinations and dirty jobs. She will do almost anything for the right price and is currently working with the Kuambu. She is cold and clever, but respectful and is extremely resilient, completely determined to complete a mission. It is not known where she came from, but it is known she washed up on a beach near Kuambu territory, somewhat altered by the Endless Ocean’s waters. She has no memory of her past, not even her real name, and without purpose, resorted to bounty hunting. She has many skills in survival, marksmanship, and can wield a sword. She carries two SHP (Super-heated plasma) Pistols and a Model 49 SHP rifle.

 

This should be a fun contest.

 

:komau:

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Can I use a link instead?

 

EDIT: Bones, can you delete this? I think I know the answer.

Duly deleted but I'll answer anyways (:P) -- yes. :)

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Category: 2nd Chances
MOC Name: Cap'n Gar-Korr
Topic: Here
Moral Type: Villian
Species Type: A mutant Vortixx
Bio: After being horribly mutated as a young Vortixx, Gar-Korr left the Island of Xia to begin his career as a pirate. He is the Captain of the flying ship The Apax, and is known for his skills with his sword.

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Category: 2nd Chances
MOC Name: Pulsar
Topic:Here
Moral Type: Morally Ambiguous
Species Type: Technically, it's a robot, but any species is fine.
Bio: Whatever.

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Category:2ndChances
MOC Name:MTX 009
Topic:Here
Moral Type: Morally Ambiguous
Species Type: Also a robot, but any species would be fine.
Bio: Whatever seems good.

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^Thanks! Would this be an acceptable entry, too?

If it is, I'll edit this one and my previous one back into my entry post. If not, then I'll have to build something new. Either way's fine, I'm just wondering if it has enough blue.

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Heck, why not! =D

If any of these three aren't acceptable, then OK.

 

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Category: 2nd Chance

MOC Name: Iza

Topic: Here

Moral Type: Hero

Species Type: Whatever (wolf rahi? XD )

Bio: In a sickening clash, the wolf horde and the fox clan began battling for ground many years ago. Generations have been raised amidst the ongoing bloodwar of the two species. Iza, sired by the Alpha of the wolf horde, seemed to be the only one who had no personal inbred hatred for the fox clan. This became a problem, as he met a young diplomat of the fox clan, Kayru. They became inseparable, a fact that got harder and harder to conceal from the two strong opposing species...

Gallery here

 

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Category: 2nd Chance

MOC Name: Meeka

Topic: Here

Moral type: Beast (not so beastly, though, is he? ^^)

Species Type: Rahi

Bio: So named for the little "Meeka meeka!" sounds it makes, this little guy is about the size of a Mata Nui Matoran, and is often kept as a pet for those who can catch it. He likes to roll over and get his tummy rubbed, and the cheery little fellow is always smiling.

Gallery here

 

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Category: New MOC

MOC Name: Data Sora

Topic: Here

Moral type: Hero

Species Type: Unidentifiable - unknown technology.

Bio: A shifty fellow - he appears to be looking for his friends. An error in an extremely distant world led him to be transported to this new world, and his physical composure was turned into a projection built entirely out of data. As this is a technology completely unknown to the world of Bionicle, few can grasp exactly what this means. Sora is good-natured and will help whoever he meets in need - but his ultimate goal is to find out how he got here, and how he can escape and return back to his normal self. His weapon is called the Keyblade, but no one knows what exactly its power is - it can only be called and used by Sora.

Gallery here

 

Good luck to everyone! I'm just taking a shot! =)

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Does one have to provide a topic link for new MOCs?

No; topic link is for the oldMOC category to prove it's not new. :)

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Could I enter a MoC with a small pet on a leash [sort of like Jaller Mari] and it still be counted as one character?

Hmmmmm....

 

As long as it's very small, I guess I'll go with yes. Very few pieces, like say, single digit number amount.

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Category: New MoC

MoC Name: Mytaht

Topic: Here it is... or not, topic deleted by the crash, will repost soon.

Moral Type: innocent, endlessly happy and optimistic

Species Type: He is a mutated Cyaho Crab [made up species]

Bio: Once a simple rahi – a Cyaho Crab – he was changed by a powerful mutagenic force into a sentient being. He is now nearly 100,000 years old, however his thought process is simple, optimistic, and childlike. He has very little understanding of actual conflict, and his primitive instincts often clash with his unintended intelligence. He can understand the Matoran language, however he has never spoken – whether this is because he can’t or just doesn’t is unknown.

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