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Tifosi 92

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I could probably ask the Short Stories Critics Club about this, but as they're looking rather busy at the moment, I'd like to see if I can get some help from a few regular members. Most of my recent writing works have gone un-reviewed lately, and it's starting to make me wonder the slightest bit if it's because I'm simply not as good at writing as I may have previously estimated. If you're reading this, I would really appreciate it if you wouldn't mind at least checking out one of the stories listed below. I'm not even asking for reviews here--if you were to read one of these stories and simply post a short blog comment on this entry telling me what you thought, that would be really helpful. Of course, reviews are still welcome, but all I'm asking is for a basic opinion of my writing. Here are some of my most recent stories, all of which have gone with little to no feedback:

 

Flying Alone

The Mansion

Wish You Were Here

 

Again, any help would be extremely appreciated, even if only to find out how my writing's been doing lately. :)

 

EDIT: This is the last time I'll be bumping this--any help would mean a lot to me.

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I'm so sorry -- I've meant to review Flying Alone and The Mansion months ago... I really will try to review those soon [i have read them, though, and liked both].

 

But, in the meantime, allow me to say this: You're a supurb writer, and don't think otherwise. Why you're not getting reviews I don't have any ideas. However, may I perhaps point you out to Story Fit? Not only will it get you to write more, but there's tons of people there who review things [each story posted has gotten like at least a few replies from various Story Fit members -- at least, the stories I've looked at so far]. Besides, I want to see more stories from you. =P

 

~ Velox

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Actually, SSC is really not always that busy--for a few days the activity dies, and then it keeps up again when people review a lot. It'd probably be a good idea just to post your stories there. The worse that could happen is that it would just take awhile for someone to get to them.

 

Also Velox beat me to what I was going to say. But I do need to get back to reviewing stories again...and writing...I miss it all.

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Well, since you took the time to bump this, I read Flying Alone. I am by no means an expert writer, but I think it was quite good and had a touching and profound message. Everything was fairly clearly and descriptively written. One thing, though: you wrote "constantly intervene frequently," which doesn't really make sense - is he intervening constantly or frequently? - but otherwise I noticed nothing wrong. Good work.
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Well, since you took the time to bump this, I read Flying Alone. I am by no means an expert writer, but I think it was quite good and had a touching and profound message. Everything was fairly clearly and descriptively written. One thing, though: you wrote "constantly intervene frequently," which doesn't really make sense - is he intervening constantly or frequently? - but otherwise I noticed nothing wrong. Good work.

 

Thanks for pointing that out. I really need to get better at accurately wording stuff. :annoyed2: I actually found and fixed another error when I read through it as well.

 

Thanks again for the read--any feedback at all is appreciated. ^_^

 

EDIT: Awesome gradient text, by the way.

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