im helping of course with character design and cartographer

I can help with all three.

Just make sure to get some more people on it, because you know how I am when it comes to work.

I'm trying to get a picture of Valderra done. B)

-Mesonak

Of course, for now, we have one of the two Zehvor made RPGs in the FINAL POLLS!

Everyone came and float the vote boat with number 8! Yay!

-Toa Levacius Zehvor

I can help with Gameplay and Character design.

I want to help with Character Design and Cartography!

-Zehvor Brenmac

Hooray, lots of help, and by the looks of my drawing skills(or lack therof).

Anyways, I finished a rough draft drawing of the solar system...sorta...solar system...that is...

Solar System

(white/dark spots = landing sites)

-MT

I see that you Zehvor are initiating your plan to take over BZP. Good luck anyway.

Totally.

IT BEGINS WITH THE LIBRARY

THEN THE RPG FORUM

THEN THE COMICS FORUM

THEN EVERYTHING ELSE

MWAHAHA

-Mesonak

And then the world.

(and then Mars)

Anyways, here's how our team is shaping up so far:

Cartography: Mesonak, Blackout, Brenmac

Character Design: Blackout, Brenmac, Mesonak, Gorgnak

Gameplay Design: Gorgnak, Mesonak

And, of course, I'll be helping out with all three. I believe MoC might be helping too.

NOTE: I decided to change Valderra to a jungle style planet, with lots of lava. Maybe to freshen up the environments.

-MT

And then the world.

 

(and then Mars)

 

Anyways, here's how our team is shaping up so far:

 

Cartography: Mesonak, Blackout, Brenmac

Character Design: Blackout, Brenmac, Mesonak, Gorgnak

Gameplay Design: Gorgnak, Mesonak

 

And, of course, I'll be helping out with all three. I believe MoC might be helping too.

 

NOTE: I decided to change Valderra to a jungle style planet, with lots of lava. Maybe to freshen up the environments.

 

-MT

NOOOOOOOOOOO

I WAS ALL SET WITH THE POST-VISORAK TA-METRU WITH LE-METRU CHUTES THING

I EVEN HAD THE PIC ALMOST DONE ;_:

owell

-Mesonak

I would do much for cartographer. However, I would certainly love to see city names, landmarks on the geographical surface, and all of that good stuff before we went and did that.

And trust me, I am an excellent map maker once you tell me what the heck to map.

-Toa Levacius Zehvor

Totally.

 

IT BEGINS WITH THE LIBRARY

 

THEN THE RPG FORUM

 

THEN THE COMICS FORUM

 

THEN EVERYTHING ELSE

 

MWAHAHA

 

-Mesonak

and im currently trying to take over the bbc forum thats why right now im overhauling a old moc to make it epic then im gonna get my dads epic 2000 dollar camera and take high quality pictures mwuahahahahahaha

Nu nu nu nu you've got it all wrong. The chutes are going to be used. We can just turn some of the land masses into grass or something(unless you have the people swimming in lava) ._.

-MT

oh kk

i'll get that pic done eventually

-Mesonak

I'm still trying to figure out what I'm going to draw. It will most likely be a map of Valderra's surface, I just need to know where things such as villages are. (Or is that up to me?) I'm also working on two projects for the summer,the Me and My Bionicles continuation I've already told you about, The Bionicle Stories (I'm also writing chapters before I post them, still working on Chapter 4.) and a less action-based story taking place in Metru Nui.

-Zehvor Brenmac

Yeah. You'll pick where the villages and stuff are.

-MT

not halo waaaaht

Shhhhh I haven't played Halo in Space yet so I dun know how that works.

-MT

Oh, it's easy; you just-Spoilers Removed -Bungie 6

So getting sta-*sniped*

You know, never-*assassinated*

Okay, fo-*splattered*

So basically what you've done is looked at Darkspace and thought "Yeah I want a piece of that". But you've added Glatorian to make it look like your own idea

Except I didn't, if you're accusing me of plagarizing. The ideas came from the previous sources, as follows:

Levacius's RPGs hosted on another website

Metroid Prime 3: Corruption

Halo 3: ODST

Okami

Super Metroid

Aftermath(my comedy)

TBTTRAH: Vundas(my epic)

Halo Reach(Space combat scene)

My story has been about sci-fi for a lot longer than Darkspace has even existed. The RPG is based loosely around the events of my story, except with a twist of Bionicle backstory. The Terna have been longtime enemies, the lost races was an idea completely based upon Metroid backstory, and your claim that this is somehow a rip off is completely innaccurate.

EDIT: I've taken a look at the Darkspace page now, and how it works, and the only thing that looks remotely familiar is the idea of multiple planets. And I've been hosting RPGs with multiple planets since last year(people such as MoC, Lev, Blackout, or Mesonak can testify to this). The gameplay is completely different, the combat system is completely different, the plotline is completely different, heck, everything except for the idea of multiple planets and the fact that there are Toa in there is completely different.

-MT

So you're not plagiarising, you're just taking ideas from a bunch of other places. You do know that's pretty much what 'plagiarism' means, right?

You don't think there are similarities? Well let's take a look shall we?

RPG set in far future? Check

Mainly set in space? Check

MU robot being used as the source of new technology? Check

Alien race bent on destroying all others? Check

Band of Bionicle beings coming together to fight the alien menace? Check

Planets are elemental themed? Check

Want me to go on?

If you're going to accuse me of that, you might as well go ahead and say that Darkspace is a complete rip off of sci fi adventures, cause "Darkspace takes the ideas of space adventures from sci fi." That's just plain stupid.

RPG set in far future? Check

Mainly set in space? Check

MU robot being used as the source of new technology? Check

Alien race bent on destroying all others? Check

Band of Bionicle beings coming together to fight the alien menace? Check

Planets are elemental themed? Check

Far future, we already discussed this. Aftermath has been doing that for about a year longer than Darkspace.

It's actually not mainly set in space. Everything happens on the other planets. We had debated only using one planet earlier, but multi planets won out(see the blog). That's what you call a team vote, not plagirism.

I don't know where you got the idea that Darkspace was the first to use the idea of reverse engineering an MN robot. That's been around since Makuta died. Oh, lemme guess, Darkspace also created the idea of aliens too, right?

Alien race bent on destroying all others. Excuse me, have you not been paying attention to Bionicle for the past 10 years? What were the Makuta trying to do, huh? And the Skrall? Or, if you don't like Bionicle, how about War of the Worlds, hmm? More aliens trying to destroy the planet. And, as you'll see(when you actually look at the RPG when it comes out ) it's not the aliens wanting to destroy everyone. But I can't give away anything more as it's spoilers.

If you're gonna say that, then you might as well say Halo plagerized Metroid, cause there are alien species trying to destroy everyone in both.

Band of Bionicles. Again, look at the Bionicle storyline. Tell me one place where a band of Bionicles doesn't fight the "evil" people trying to destroy the universe. One place.

I'll give you a hint: Never. What you basically just said is that Darkspace invented heroes, the people that fight together against evil. As if you hadn't lost all credibility in your argument yet.

Planets are elemental themed? Check

The planets aren't elemental themed, and if you played the game(owait it hasn't come out yet), you'd know that. The closest you'll find to one element is Arcilos, the mainly ice world, which doesn't even involve ice cause it takes place underground. And it has things like water areas, high tech bases, and weaponries.

Valderra was a jungle planet, but then was hit by a meteor which had a dinosaur like effect. It ended up making it a half jungle, half lava type place, with little water spread across the surface. And if you're gonna say that's elemental, then you might as well say that Earth is ripping off Bionicle, cause it has water. Again, incredibly stupid.

Deavum Omega is a gas giant. 'Nuff said.

Once again, you have no evidence, and no ground to stand on as far as your accusations go. Please try reading the actual RPG development before you go and accuse me of plagarizing, k?

-MT

So the gist of your argument is that your RPG is derivative, not plagiarist.

way to go

I am trying to help by pointing out flaws I see in your RPG. If i read through it and go "This is Darkspace!" then others will too. But hey, if you want to stick your fingers in your ears and ignore me...

If you're going to accuse me of that, you might as well go ahead and say that Darkspace is a complete rip off of sci fi adventures, cause "Darkspace takes the ideas of space adventures from sci fi." That's just plain stupid.

Darkspace takes inspiration, not whole ideas

It's actually not mainly set in space. Everything happens on the other planets

On other planets, so in other words in space

MU Robot came from the idea of reverse engineering, which was first brought about in the 1960s. Then it was used again in Transformers(forgot to mention), when Megatron was reverse engineered to create technology.

Darkspace used the MU as a source for space technology, so do you. Saying "Well these people did it to!" is irrelevant as they didn't do it with the MU

Alien race bent on destroying all others. Excuse me, have you not been paying attention to Bionicle for the past 10 years? What were the Makuta trying to do, huh? And the Skrall?

Both Makuta and Skrall were native to the areas they were attempting to conquer. So not aliens

Band of Bionicles. Again, look at the Bionicle storyline. Tell me one place where a band of Bionicles doesn't fight the "evil" people trying to destroy the universe. One place.

Year four where you had the Toa Metru basically trying to prove themselves, not stop global armageddon. Ta-da

The planets aren't elemental themed, and if you played the game(owait it hasn't come out yet), you'd know that.

You describe Valderra as a desert/fire planet, Acrilos as an ice planet, and in another entry mention a water planet. I call that elemental themed

Once again, you have no evidence, and no ground to stand on as far as your accusations go. Please try reading the actual RPG development before you go and accuse me of plagarizing, k?

Please try reading and understand my posts, and keeping up with your own RPG, if some of my points are anything to go by, before rushing in and thinking to yourself "Ah insults bad! Hate hate hate!"