Astris Janus Posted January 12, 2014 Share Posted January 12, 2014 So, taken advice from the last pic (link) and because others asked for it, here he is: Kopaka, Toa of Ice Comments and criticisms much appreciated Astris Janus Quote Right, new forum, new signature. Or, at least, a reboot.Dual Sides; An Expanded Multiverse EpicBionicle Anime: Toa Mata"If at first you don't succeed, redefine success."- Anonymous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grandmaster Lehvorak Posted January 12, 2014 Share Posted January 12, 2014 I am trying to figure out if you are trying to make Kopaka float or have him stand on the ground, because right now it appears he is floating in mid-air. If you are trying to ground him, he needs to have a shadow underneath him. Also, I think what would help is having some highlights to your work aside from all darker value. It will give an idea where that light is facing and might help make your work stand out more! Overall, good job! -Lehvorak Quote << LEHVORAK ZONE >> Web Design - Graphic Design - Illustration Find out more on: _ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Cup of Fail Posted January 12, 2014 Share Posted January 12, 2014 Looks really good, like the body and leg of it but the arms are too short and the mask is really odd to me. Quote My Topics MOCs: Construct-a-Astronaut __________________________________________________ Find Me On Flickr Twitter Youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astris Janus Posted January 13, 2014 Author Share Posted January 13, 2014 I am trying to figure out if you are trying to make Kopaka float or have him stand on the ground, because right now it appears he is floating in mid-air. If you are trying to ground him, he needs to have a shadow underneath him. Also, I think what would help is having some highlights to your work aside from all darker value. It will give an idea where that light is facing and might help make your work stand out more! Overall, good job! -Lehvorak Yeah, next time I will definitely focus on grounding him better (Well, not the next one cause I want them floating, but after that one ) and on my highlights Looks really good, like the body and leg of it but the arms are too short and the mask is really odd to me. Now that I look at it again, the front arm is just a bit short. The back arm is meant to be bent behind him so that one is okay.And my god, I dislike the Akaku. I mean, I thought it would look good, but it was difficult to fit onto his face because it's so round >.< So I tried to moulded it to his face and... yeah. Thanks for the comments Astris Janus Quote Right, new forum, new signature. Or, at least, a reboot.Dual Sides; An Expanded Multiverse EpicBionicle Anime: Toa Mata"If at first you don't succeed, redefine success."- Anonymous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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