Takanuinuva Posted June 4, 2012 Share Posted June 4, 2012 (edited) My entry to the your fired contest.Several Kahu were experimented on by Makuta Mutran to try to make an immortality formula. The result was a Firey Rahi that when killed dissolved into ashes and rebuilt itself. But unfortunately the effect made the Rahi very aggresive and rendered the Rahi totally Blind. Thus Mutran abandoned the formula and released the Kahu to KarzanhiHere is the picsFronthttp://upload.bricks...nuva/mc/005.jpgBackhttp://upload.bricks...nuva/mc/006.jpgSidehttp://upload.bricks...nuva/mc/007.jpgGallery when publichttp://upload.bricks...ry.cgi?f=299202Comments and critisim appriciated Edited June 4, 2012 by Oxymoronaphobia Quote I am Takanui Nuva. The Toa Nuva of Light I also go by Baron Von Brickenstein AFOL, Gamer and overall nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted June 4, 2012 Share Posted June 4, 2012 I actually like the back story. Anyways, I really like the fiery appearance and the head is nicely designed. By the way, where are the eyes? Also, where did the pieces used to create the feet come from? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Takanuinuva Posted June 4, 2012 Author Share Posted June 4, 2012 (edited) I actually like the back story. Anyways, I really like the fiery appearance and the head is nicely designed. By the way, where are the eyes? Also, where did the pieces used to create the feet come from?The feet are the claws from the glatorian malum.There are no eyes. I forgot to add that the Kahu became blind from the formula. I'll add that in Edited June 4, 2012 by Oxymoronaphobia Quote I am Takanui Nuva. The Toa Nuva of Light I also go by Baron Von Brickenstein AFOL, Gamer and overall nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Obsessionist Posted June 5, 2012 Share Posted June 5, 2012 I like it! It's not overyly complex, but it does look nice. I love your use of the Malum claws for the feet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tent163phantoka Posted June 5, 2012 Share Posted June 5, 2012 Best of luck, fellow contestant! I like it. Looks kinda like a bug. Quote My Library! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Reverb> Posted June 6, 2012 Share Posted June 6, 2012 The torso is creative, but is lacking the armor it needs to really cover it up. The head however, looks very nice. It looks like a bug/bird which is what you were aiming for. Love the backstory. However those l think those legs are to small to support the whole Moc. The arms are nice, but they just don't go wiht those legs. I wish you luck in the BBC Oxy! ~Gravity Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dralcax Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 You could give him a more birdlike body, because now his torso has Pohatuan proportions, making his wings resemble bizarre arms, which is probably not the look you're going for. Also, the feet should be tiny claws, not huge ones. Try the orange Nui-Rama's orange Onua claws instead of Malum's large claws. Bird feet should only be big enough to support the MOC, and the legs should be minimized as well. As well, you gave him a very humanoid posture. Try making him lean forwards and balance it with a longer, flat tail. Finally, give him a rounder body and a more conical beak somehow, it will make it look more birdlike. Good luck in the contest, though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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