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    Official My Little Pony topic

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    "Hmmmm. Love for me is like, you meet somepony. But you don't want to murder them.""I want to give you something that I was never lucky enough to find at your age. A friend. And know that no matter what happens. I won't leave you."

    Where are those two from? I especially want to find the source of the first one. :D

    "Hmmmm. Love for me is like, you meet somepony. But you don't want to murder them.""I want to give you something that I was never lucky enough to find at your age. A friend. And know that no matter what happens. I won't leave you."

    Where are those two from? I especially want to find the source of the first one. :D
    The first is from an apple jack spoof called apple mov.

    Official My Little Pony topic

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    Topic change (sue me). Name some of your favorite fan quotes(like from fandfics, fanimations, abridges etc)Hey hey hey stay outta my shed!Swag!Did she just hit purbirty backwards?!More Applejack Daniels!!!Forgot you I can eat all these apples!!!How do you have a southern accent when we are in western Europe?!And she sent Princess Luna TO THE MOOOOOOOOOONNNNNN!!!!!

    Bionicle: Learning Our Past Review Topic

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    Hello again, Alt. D, here is your official ECC review. As fate would have it, the ECC rotation put me in charge of reviewing another one of your epics. Funny how that works, huh? Anyway, I've been away from home for a few days, which is why it took me longer than usual to review this for you. So without any further delays, let's get to it.A couple things to start. First, you split a single chapter into three posts. You know you can just edit the first post if you want to add extra writing, right? Second, looking at the multitude of little errors I came across, I'm going to assume you still don't have MS Word or something of the sort. If you don't want to drop the money on it, I highly recommend you proofread your work very, very carefully.Regarding the actual chapter, I'm getting a lot of telling, not much showing. This feels suspiciously like a prologue more than anything, almost like the first chapter hasn't really begun. If done right, your three posts of exposition could become their own story. Something to think about. Getting back to the point, you've created a large playing field for your "Gunsmiths" to roam and play in, and that's a good thing. Nothing worse than a writer feeling boxed in with their work.Because only a few months have passed since I last reviewed a piece of your work, I find myself being drawn to say a lot of the things I brought up about Mass Destruction, in terms of your writing abilities and where you need improvement. But of course, I'm not here to reiterate. If you're curious, follow this link to have a glance at what I told you. Unfortunately, there isn't enough in this new epic yet to properly judge if you are improving. The ECC doesn't receive many requests, and we would be more than happy to review this again when you have more written.For the time being, reread your work (aloud if you have to) to catch those little issues. I also recommend reading other works, both here on the forums and in libraries. Like a musician, a writer can learn a great deal from the work of others. Good luck, Alt. D.-Ced

    Thanks. The reasonI don't use Microsoft word is cause this is either written on my mac or iPhone 4S. But thanks for the tip and I have just made the changes. I'll ask if you can review it again once I get a few more chapters in. Also Mass Destruction is erased( figuratively speaking) and the other fanfics I made are obsolete now since Learning our Past is the new story.

    Bionicle: Learning Our Past

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    Chapter 1: This Sucks...(Zacax's Side)I was running for my life now, with thoudsands of Proto-darts (bullets to you) being shoot at me from the robotic turrets that looked like armless vahkis with an added leg. I am Zacax, a Ta-matoran. Tahukama found me in a burnt down vilIage after some of the Makuta and their lackeys came and raided the place, with me knocked out and everyone gone. He took me to his place and told me that I was what he was looking, and wanted me to be his apprentice. At first I thought when I would become his apprentice, it would be like being in a chamber with thousands of scrolls and books teaching you about your powers and skills. Tahukama was different. He slapped me into a training room with four other matoran, running for our lives! Now new trainees would be running from paint bullets that only freeze you, not for us. Proto-darts were the bullets for our legit guns and they could penetrate a thick layer of either antidermis armor or protodermis armor! The other four matoran with were Kyleax, a young le-matoran with many scouting skills that he learned on his own, Bosal who was a strong Po-matoran and he was faster than all of us! There was also Brysoa, a ko-matoran who for some reason had small bit of elemental powers...I think he is cursed or something, and then there's Mataklu, a matoran of magnetism with the ability to hack into cmputers. I had an ability to invent, and I already had a shotgun that I made, and it sucks that I can't use it here! I mean I can just shoot the living daylights out of those scrapheeps and-OH MATA NUI! The turrets are shooting faster now! And Bosal is still acting like its nothing! Luckily this was a time trial, and if we did get shot, the Medics would come and patch us up. SO can't wait to be a toa now! The mask I have is a Hau, and I could use it to block those bullets and just sit there and wait for it to be all over.

    Official My Little Pony topic

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    I love Derpy and all, and I'm real happy for her, but Scootaloo needs an episode someday. The only Cutie Mark Crusader not featured in their own, or having a big sister for that matter. Pipsqueak can join too.

    When I started watching the show, thought Scootaloo was the younger sis of RD. so yea she should have an episode

    Official My Little Pony topic

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    I like to think Derpy has graduated to supporting pony after she was featured in The Last Roundup.

    Actually, they're changing it from the mane 6 to the mane 7 so Derpy's a main character now.
    Please provide some level of support for that statement.I'd be suprised if that happened. But not too much, seeing as I've seen other shows bump up popular secondary characters to main cast status. But I'd at least expect more use of Derpy before that option would be considered. At least, she would need like 4 or 5 more episodes of her doing more than making a cameo.
    Not to mention, what about her element of harmony? Or will she not be given one?

    Official My Little Pony topic

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    Intel Spoiler alert!: A Valentines episode is being planned were the Cutie MArk Crusaders try to make Cheerily and Big Mac fall in love! I see fanfics in the future, and they ain't for kids...

     

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    Lyra is best non-Derpy background pony.

    I like to think Derpy has graduated to supporting pony after she was featured in The Last Roundup.
    Actually, they're changing it from the mane 6 to the mane 7 so Derpy's a main character now.

    The song just didn't flow as well, despite the cider.

    Yeah; I kinda don't like what they've been doing this season by having dialogue in the middle of songs, too...

    Octavia is best non-Derpy background pony.

    FIxed for ya :biggrin:
    Octavia and Lyra are equal in my book. :P
    Derpy a mane pony?! Best idea ever! Wonder what her element is...

    Ninjago: Cgi Or Anime?

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    As much I love I in CGI I think the ninja and serpentine would look so beast in anime and so would the skulkin(now that would be scary and awesome!)I know! I'll post some pics of them in an anime form!

    A Ninjago anime - provided the characters are human, kind of like what Tohkann's done with Re-Birth Chronicles - would be pretty interesting in my humble opinion.The ninja are technically human, however they are in a minifig state. In fact, all minifigs are technically human.EDIT: This might be better as a poll.

    CGI works perfectly for NINJAGO in my opinion. I am not sure anime would work too well for minifigures.The ninja are human, however all the characters are in their set form to promote the ninjago theme, which was the reason ninjago master of spinjitzu~Gata. ;)

    Best Game Of 2011

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    Three:Rayman Origins: For its epic revive of Rayman, beautiful artwork(and nymphs XD), awesome gameplay, and a being one of the few non gory games to come out near the end of the year.Halo CEA: For a great celebration of 10 years of Halo, mind blowing revamp of graphics in the campaign, return of 6 classic multiplayer maps, and a way for new fans to catch up on the story.Elder Scrolls V Skyrim: Need I say more? Beautiful graphics, amazing abilities, thousands of quests, amazing story, and dragons.

    Bionicle: Learning Our Past

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    Posted · Edited by Alt. D

    10 years together they trained before the young matoran turned into a toa, and soon after that, Tahu began to fade away. His life force was coming to a near end...Tahu, knowing he was going to die, gave every last bit of his Toa Powers to his apprentice. Tahukama was given th e golden armor to wield, with him being the Prodigy of Tahu. Tahukama took the Gunneraso into a new direction, by training them to learn about the old ways of combat. You see, Gunneraso were Toa and Glatorian, but they had been trained in the use of fire arms for quite some time, they had forgotten of their previous ways of combat. Tahukama began to separate the Gunsmiths unto groups, the Toa would master fire arms, and the Glatorian would train their old ways, in combat. The side of good would have to know every battle technique, every trick, ability, skill and strategy in order to return peace to New Spherus.

    Rpg Halo: Retribution

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    I'll joinBZP Username -Alt. DCharacter Name -Zac, Spartan-Z17Species -HumanAffiliation - Spartan-IIIsRank - SergeantFaction -ODSTSpecialize in - Invention, Demolition, Hacking, DrivingPrimary Weapon -ShotgunSide-Arm -Rocket LauncherGrenade - Two Frag GrenadesAppearance -White skined, Short Brown hair, bangs part to right, hazel eyes, 6 feet tallBiography -I used to be a regular teen, living on Reach, creating machinary. Until that fateful happened. I heard about this new Spartan project and I wanted to see what it was about! Luckily, they mistook me for a young adult and I was recruited into the program. Instead of them giving me the default armor, I was able to make my own after I told them about my ability to build. I made my own armor, which is red and black, and I was placed with in ODST and I was asked to make my own squad, think they were putting me into a test. Now I need to assemble my crew...

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