JiMing

JiMing always keeps three of each of his weapons.He laughed at the Sumiki as he slapped it repeatably in the face with his Glove of Fire.

Luckily for JiMing, his weapons were fireproof and he was a Ta-Matoran.He smashed the glass with his Earthshaker, and used his Gale Spear to shoot the sharp glass shards towards the Sumiki.

Not letting the Sumiki rest, JiMIng used his Gale Spear to "fly" over to the other side of the arena, stabbing the Sumiki in the head with his sword.

JiMing deflected the cheesepuffs with his Tahu Mata sword, then hit his Earthshker on the ground, causing some more rubble to fall on the Sumiki.

JiMing stabbed the Sumiki in the face with his Tahu Mata sword, then Hit it on the head with his Earthshaker.

IC: While Sumiki was circling aroung Josefina, JiMing punched the Sumiki in the face with his Glove of Fire.

IC:JiMing knocked the Sumiki out of the air with a powerful gust of wind summoned by his Gale Spear."I could defeat you with my eyes blindfolded and both arms behind my back!" JiMIng taunted.

OOC:

OOC: Erm...with all due respect, could you not control my character, please? I'd like to be in charge of that.

Whoopsies, sorry.IC:Not giving the Sumiki a chance to turn around, JiMing started slashing it's leg with his sword, shouting taunts at it.

Despite Zadakh's plan, JiMing still went up to the Sumiki and started slapping it in the face with his Glove of Fire, giving it some pretty bad burns."That wasn't part of the plan." Zadakh complained.

JiMing uses his Gale Spear to launch himself in the air.As he fell, he brought out his Earthshaker and hit the Sumiki squarely on the head, not only giving the Sumiki a nasty bruise on it's forehead, but also bringing some rubble down on it.

I lurked around the forums for about 5 years .And just when I was about to join, the forums went offline.

Ah, but I hid the Vahi and Mask of Creation in a pocket dimension.A train runs you over in slow motion.My masks!

Anyone else notice that ToaAwesomeGuy60930 is in the classroom?Anyways, genius as always, Gerlicky.

Because I feel like it, here is a little filler I quickly made.Xbox is terribleTo tell the truth, I think the Xbox is overrated.

The arms are too close to the body and the Toa bodies just barely simalar too Chimoru.I'm also getting tired of all these add-ons to Chimoru.

An interesting way to start it - by being out there and hoping people will come by. An okay opener, could've used things like motion lines to signal the stand was flying through the air better.

Yeah, I had no idea how to start it off any other way. Hopefully future comics will be more original.I thought I did use motion lines on the stand, I don't know what you mean?

I said it should've been better. It was just a bunch of flat lines behind the stand, rather than, say, connected to it.

Oh yeah, that could have been done better. Maybe I could have done a motion blur thing, but I have almost NO clue how to use Paint.net.

Santa makes cars? Then who makes the toys?And "Shun the disbeliever!" is also genius.

An interesting way to start it - by being out there and hoping people will come by. An okay opener, could've used things like motion lines to signal the stand was flying through the air better.

Yeah, I had no idea how to start it off any other way. Hopefully future comics will be more original.I thought I did use motion lines on the stand, I don't know what you mean?

Ah, these comics are actually not bad! I don't know why, but that comic was actually pretty entertaining.Let's see the characters. We have:-One sensible person-One nervous/shy one-Three noobs-One love interest-Two advertisers-One insane/intelligent mind-And one sociopath.Before you get upset, that wasn't an insult. That was just an observation, and I'm eager to find out what the characters will develop to be. :biggrin:BTW, if I PGS, do I have to submit a Chimoru spritesheet?

Almost exactly right. There is a love interest, but for someone else(future comic spoiler!). And one guy unfortunately, has two personalities: one intelligent and one stupid/dumb/noobish. And the first guy was just reluctant to join up, the reason will be revealed in a future comic.And yes, if you want to PGS, it has too be some form of Chimoru. GS can use any kit they want(because that could make for a potential joke ).Edit: BTW there's only TWO noobs, one of them blew up. And the last person has a "too tough for the world" kind of personality.

TIME PARADOX*Universe explodes*It's cool how you made your One-year Vahi into an actual person.Looks like you're off to a good start.P.S. You should put a link to your website in your topic.

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IT'S DA SHOOPQUAZAAHHHHHH NEEDLES! !!!!Holiday Comics:Tip for St. Patrick's Day.

It's amazing how many contributions were made in such a short time.One thing I'm surprised to see is that all the contributions seem to have the same style, with not one looking out of place.This is one of the most unique kits I've ever seen.

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That was, without a doubt, THE BEST CHRISTMAS COMIC EVAR.My favorite interruption was OOMPAH, but the dubstep part was also funny.And by the way, could you explain why there are TWO Kahis?(Did -Windrider- really send you his sprite or did you just make up his appearance?)

Actually, I really wasn't fooled whatsoever . I knew you were going to pull something like that on us.Nice try though.

What I meant is that maybe instead of just one large paragraph, you could split up the chapter into different paragraphs to match the tone of each scene.