OmiChron

A character with long, dark hair turning to look over their shoulder, with a somewhat pleasantly expectant expression on their face.

Backfired. The tiger decides to attack you.

I wish for a balloon.

I kindly ask you to remove the mask from your body, lest I be forced to resort to violent measures.

Still your mask.

For now.

I am teleported right next to your car, and attempt negotiations. I offer you a fair deal on the next tophat you purchase, and a discount card for JB-HiFi.

Unfortunately for you, you decline the offer. I jump you with my kolhii stick and satchel as you approach. I grab the mask and place it intomy satchel, hoping against hope that my plan will work.

I make a dash for the nearest cliff, surprisingly and conveniently located a mere ten metres away. I sprint as fast as my stumpy little Onu-Matoran legs can take me and dive off the cliff--I am surrounded by a golden glow, and suddenly I crash into the protosteel floor of Makuta Malignus' chamber.

"Sir!" I call. "I have it."

Makuta Malignus' mask.

As the 'game over' lettering begins to flash, my Matoran self calls desperately to Makuta Malignus:

"It doesn't have to be this way!"

I quickly detail the true history of Mata Nui's robot body - the Matoran Universe - and how Makuta Teridax was supposed to inherit that body. Being the only surviving Makuta, I explain to Malignus that he is the rightful leader of the Matoran Universe. I pledge my allegiance and my skills in negotiation to attain him the mask and protect it once in his possession.

Makuta Malignus' mask.

I wail in despair at the loss of a potentially exceptional, if inanimate, friend. The sound waves from my cry form a solid beam of sadness, which disintegrates your ship and causes the debris to fall back to the ground. I scrabble through the post-apocalyptic-movie-set-esque landscape and clutch desperately at the mask.

My mask.

(Oh my gosh, she's Mata Nui!)

I grab Timelady Gallade and bolt.

My Timelady Gallade...mask...thing...!

But as I am magically, impossibly, respawned, I catch the mask midair and toss it to you.

Timelady Gallade's mask!

I trip you, and reveal your scram to be a sham. In all the confused, outraged hubbub that ensues, I pluck the mask from your fingers.

My mask!

Granted, but they all rise up against you.

I wish that the person below me will be kind in the corruption of my wish.

I posted in the googledoc for issues, but just wanted to make sure the message got across.

I'm excessively interested in the English language, especially grammar, spelling, and sentence structures. I noticed a number of instances where dialogue has incorrect syntax or where the sentence could be better phrased.

The game itself is exceptional, with engaging minigames and a well-thought-out story. I have no experience with coding for games, but friends have told me of the difficulties they have encountered and the time it takes to get things done.

Because of this, I'm sure spelling is a second-grade priority. But if any help at all is required for spellchecking or editing the dialogue (for character interaction and/or cutscenes), please let me know! I'm more than happy to help out.

~OmiChron

Is that blue fire hot or cold to the touch?

Hmm... I'm torn. I like all the different Koros. I would almost say Onu-Koro, but wonder what would be included. Ga-Koro is a very close second. It's probably my favourite MNOG Koro, but the underground village seems more appropriate for Minecraft. *shrugs*

This is great! The models are really nice, the story is good, the characters are interesting... I'm looking forward to future story advances ^^

Hey TTV crew!I heard in one of your videos that you wanted something that could alter biomes. Check this out: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1119044-tool-biome-painter-08-edit-your-minecraft-worlds-biomes/ . This program can alter snow/rain, grass, water and leaf shades, as well as wood textures.This combined with MCEdit could make Le- and Ko- Wahis more accurate for the adventure map/server release. I was thinking Le-Wahi could be a mix of swamp and jungle biomes for accuracy. Maybe the jungle floor can have a marsh (swampwater and lillypads); but again this falls to you.I hope this is of some help! Let me know if I can aid in any way! Thanks for your time!Nepak/Omi

Heather, come home!Best wishes to her family, and I'm praying she be found alive and well.

I voted Onu-Matoran for a number of reasons:

• [*]I am shortsighted, but see better in the dark[*]I get headaches if I'm in bright light[*]I am creative/resourceful[*]I believe that a lot can be learned from the past, and there is much we have to learn[*]I can swim (Taipu could )[*]I prefer the element of Earth[*]I like the colours available to Onu-Matoran

Speaking of colours, I need help with my BZPower RPG character... masks, colours and such don't seem to add up too well, and I don't want to copy any existing Onu-Matoran. If anyone can help, feel free to send me a PM/Profile feed. I prefer the "tohunga" or "mctoran" design, so I use the Matoran Maker.Thanks!Omi

I do hope she's found, alive and well! My prayers are with her!

I am indescribably keen for this! I'm really disappointed that I didn't discover this earlier though... I'd love to help out with future projects if I can! On a side note, I had an idea for your server (merely my two cents); maybe you could have it as a survival smp/adventure map, but no building/destroying unless part of the adventure. We could RP and everything... But that is a little too much for a month...If this is unfeasable, when the server goes down and the map is put up, may I host my own public server for that map? Credit would be listed where credit is due, of course, and it wouldn't be a dedicated server.Thanks! Omicron