Jakura Nuva

IC: Varan

How fortunate for me.

"Well, perhaps I'll see your work some other time. Anyways, Arcturia here and I are on a tight schedule - we best be going."

IC: Varan

Varan tilted his head and laughed doubtingly.

"Is that so? I had a friend like that - Ensilus. Though, he was a full-fledged Ko-Toa with a Mask of Healing, so you'll forgive me if I'm a bit dubious of your claim."

IC: Varan

Varan thought about that for a moment.

"Hmm... Delinquent?"

IC: Varan

He tried not to roll his eyes.

"Invisible? Really? I doubt there are many invisible beings around here... sir."

Ancient

IC: Varan

Either he's playing at something... or he's an enormous idiot. Most likely the latter.

"The gate is there," he said slowly, "to keep out those who don't belong. Like wild Rahi, Rahkshi, various and sundry thieves and villains..."

IC: Toenga

Toenga grinned mischievously. "Only females?"

IC: Toenga

Toenga stabbed a fish brutally with his knife, then shoved said fish into his mouth, being careful not to fillet the inside of his mouth. As he licked his fingers joyously, he realized Dessa had wandered off.

"Uh-oh!" he exclaimed, wiping his hands on a leaf and jumping to his feet. "Dessa's gone! She probably got lost in the crowd!"

He chuckled to himself, feeling quite superior. "Guess she isn't used to traffic like this. Come on, Arzy Arzaki - we gotta go find her."

Yes, probably.

Der, is bacon good?

IC: Varan - Ko-Koro

Arcturia had been quiet as ever behind him as she followed. He couldn't see the Toa... but he could feel her. His Mask of Sensory Aptitude was a strange one, certainly - it oftened seemed to have a mind of it's own. That, or he was triggering it unintentionally.

"Excuse me sir, but where am I currently at?"

The voice came from somewhat below him - turning, Varan expected to see a Matoran. What he saw instead was a bit unnerving.

"Uh... you're in Ko-Koro," he replied, trying not to stare at the strange little being. "The Village of Ice. Where else would you be?"

My brother said the same as you about it, though he insisted I change it to either a bazooka or a rocket launcher. 

 

Also, I wanted to add claws, but they looked a little goofy when holding his weapons. They claws stuck out way past the fingertips and made for a really awkward design, so I just settled for leaving them out.

. Do you have any Bohrok eye-pieces in white or silver? That would make it look better in my opinion.

As for the claws, I see... that's a bit unfortunate, as it's the only thing of the body I feel could really be improved on. Nevertheless, it looks great anyways - I just think the claws would provide an extra touch of malice that'd go well with his "half-light, half-dark" theme .

Very nicely done, T1S! I think you did an amazing job with proportions especially - I also like the visible limb piece right above the hips, as they remind me of pistons and provide a very (if not unintended) mechanical feel - very G1 BIONICLE, I'd say .

The only complaints I have is with the weapons - for starters, the gun feels to small for Takanuva's titanic size. If you find a way to add on to/up-size it, it would, IMO, look much better. As for the spear, everything about it looks great to me except for the translucent Bohrok eyes on the end. Call it a small nitpick of mine, but I don't really like how they look. Again, it's more of a personal preference for me.

As an extra note, he needs claws - either using these or these. The original Titan Takanuva had claws, so it feels fitting that this one should, too.

Otherwise, absolutely fantastic! A solid 9/10 in my book !

IC: Varan - Ko-Koro Gates

Varan kept up his pace towards the entrance, not knowing what else to say. This woman was obviously a thief of some sorts - well, perhaps not technically a thief. He'd only see her loot a dead body so far. Which was gross either way.

Then again, he wasn't perfect either.

The Toa crossed his arms as the memory surfaced, wanting to blot it out, but also needing it as reassurance. After all, it wasn't... on purpose. He hadn't done it intentionally. He hadn't tried to...

Ugh. He hated flashbacks. He wasn't that kind of person.

Quietly stepping through the gates, Varan continued into Ko-Koro, not bothering to see if Arcturia was still following.

IC: Toenga

"Shape up, dude," Toenga hissed to Arzaki as he elbowed him in the the kneecap. "You're making a scene. Eat like a normal Toa, please, not a Rahi."

Wow, I didn't think this would get so many replies!

 

Also, UNGLUED JOIN ME US!!!

Ghiddy, if you want to be fair, I should also be considered a top leader - it was I who first asked for a melded mask after seeing T1S's, and it's that which inspired you. I think you, T1S and I should all share equal "leedership" of the Force

Therefore, Unglued, join ME GHIDDY T1S US!!!

OOC: Limericks, ey, Perp? Interesting choice of form...

IC: Toenga

Toenga hoisted his bag over his shoulder and walked back up to Dessa.

"Sorry for making you wait - Twiddle-Dum there is a terrible fisher-Toa. Anyways, I managed to catch enough for lunch. He and I can eat on the way to my girlfriend's house, and after getting some things from her we'll set off."

Well done, Ghiddy!

Tahu X Gali 4EVER

Great to see the topic up! Amazing job as always, T1S

IC: Toenga

"Uh... okay."

IC: Toenga

"Uh, wut?"

IC: Toenga

Toenga breaks into laughter - a high-pitched, giggly sound well-associated with his character.

"What a chump," he said as he hoisted his bag over his shoulder. "Don't fret - I've got enough for all three of us."

He winked. "Maybe I'll even let you have partial credit - you can use it to flirt with Dessa. "

IC: Toenga

Toenga reeled in his fourth Ruki and tossed it in a bag with the others.

"I dunno... maybe cos you're not using proper equipment?"

IC: Dessa

 

"I'm fine with fish, but I'm not too hungry, really. Like I said, I just ate."

IC: Toenga

"Not even a little bit?"

Toenga frowned. "Well, suit yourself. Come on, Arzaki - I think I can rig an extra pole for you, and I have plenty of string and bait."

Ah, finally!

Congratulations, Scott - I'm so very glad to know your joining the team. You deserve this, and I look forward to seeing your work!