Vorred

The second chapter has been released!

Whoa, okay

 

You have everything that's needed then. I wouldn't have thought you already have a bachelor in this... but well, seeing the quality of this, I could've probably guessed so.

 

Is there any help you need on... easy tasks? I know that modelling and texturing isn't the only thing a game needs. I could provide help on writing or something similar in case you need it to get this project going even faster.

From what I've seen so far everything you guys created looks absolutely amazing. I and probably many others always wished for a Mata Nui Online Game with better visuals, as some areas (like the beach you mentioned) can look very ugly. I've already spend hours looking through all kinds of galleries to find remade artworks of all those locations... and to get all of them in one game? It's better than anything I could've ever wished for!

 

The extras included are stunning! The animated Pakari looks exactly like in the game and that bag will surely come in handy! I don' think it's possible to create anything really similar to it with normal Bionicle pieces, so a 3D-printed part is nice to have!

 

I'm not sure when you plan to release it, how far the progress came so far, but when the time comes (for a kickstarter, probably) I'll make sure to buy a copy of this amazing project!

I like it a lot! [ ] Good photography, good poses, interesting script... 10 out of 10! []

That's nice to hear! Stay tuned, there's much more to come

This is just incredible.

 

This looks so amazing from what I've seen so far, everything was instantly recognizable and yet looked new in the polished 3D models. The landscapes of Po-Koro are simply beautiful with those shaders! I always wanted to see a "remake" of some sorts of the game, but who would ever think a fan could create it?

 

You did a fantastic job here. I really hope this project will be finished!

 

How were you able to do all the modeling and texturing? Have you learned the use of those programs somewhere or have you just tried it on your own?

The first chapter has been added!

Welcome yet again to the land of Balfe Nui!

After the Toa of the Farside Village escaped from the protosteel worm, they were recruited by the Patriots, a group of Elite Toa. The threat of Nuva and his infected warriors is still there, and the new team must do everything in their power to stop him...

This comic was made in 2013. This is the direct sequel to Uprising, so make sure to read that story first!

Here are the links to each page:

Prolog: Assault
Chapter 1: Gathering
Chapter 2: Swampland
Chapter 3: Heights
Chapter 4: Solitude
Chapter 5: Renegade
Chapter 6: Resurrection
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Epilog

Edit: Cancelled due to the limited amount of interest.

I hope you enjoy!

Made using: Sanyo Xacti S4 and iPhone 5 (camera), Comic Life 2, Gimp 2.8 and Picasa 3

The final chapter, the epilog, has been released! Please tell me what you think

 

This isn't the end of the comic. As I made the second installment a year ago, I just need to do a few adjustments for it to be ready to be posted here. Stay tuned!

...yikes.

 

Considering what just happened in the comic, does that mean that the story will be ending soon?

The next part will be the Epilog to this comic, yes. But there's much more to come. Uprising is only the first installment in the comic trilogy!

The sixth chapter has been added!

I really like what you're doing with this. Comics have been called the invisible art because the story is told mostly through the space between the panels - and not through the panels themselves! Consciously or not, you have given each of these transitions just the right amount of "space" both to show what is happening, and to let the reader figure out the in-between. In other words, you've balanced the discrete and the continuous aspects of comic-making very well.

Thanks for the long feedback, I really appreciate it! And the things you mentioned were some I haven't heard from anybody before yet! It's great you took notice of that

 

Good to have you along as one of my readers!

The fifth chapter has been released!

Interesting. I'll have to keep my eye on this comic.

 

Out of curiosity, did you cut up an Ignika to make that mask, or did you re-cast it or something?

Great to have yet another follower!

 

The custom mask is a cut and modded Ignika, that's right. It was one of those pieces I made many years ago which were still laying around, and even though it's not the best custom, I thought I could still give it some use.

The fourth chapter has been released! Please tell me what you think

The plot is rather enticing and I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Chapter 3 of the comic has been released! Please tell me what you think

Really gripping. Great photography. Can't wait to see more.

Great to hear that you liked it! And good to know the new design of this page works for you 

Looks good so far! What kind of comic will it be? Drawn, sprite-art or photographed?

Welcome, readers, to the land of Balfe Nui!

Follow the amazing journey of a Toa team... but not an ordinary type of team you know. The Toa look like the Toa Nuva - except for their colors, which are all swapped. They have next to no memory of their past when they first awake at a strange, new land...

This comic was made in 2012 and the dialogues/text boxes were rewritten in 2014. Is is the first installment in a comic trilogy, which follows the character's development in both skill, mind and their armor styles.

Just click on the links below to read each page!

Prolog: Awakening
Chapter 1: Evidence
Chapter 2: Nightfall
Chapter 3: Formation
Chapter 4: Conquest
Chapter 5: Discovery
Chapter 6: Destiny (Part 1)
Chapter 6: Destiny (Part 2)
Epilog: Departure

I hope you enjoy!

Made using: Sanyo Xacti S4 (camera), Comic Life 2, Gimp 2.8 and iPhoto

Alright then, I see how others did it and how the style in forums for comics is. 

 

My two topics can be closed, I'll put everything regarding Uprising into one with embedded links only.

After the Prolog, the first chapter follows! Read it here: http://i.imgur.com/mzyUtJ0.jpg

 

Or just look at it right here:

 

Alright then. Thanks for the tips.

 

How to I deeplink images? I'm new to the forum HTML and not used to most of the codes yet.

I spell checked those. Could you tell me where errors are? 

 

I have no problem with the size of the images, they display perfectly fine for me. What's happening on your end?

Hello fellow users!

 

The comic you're about to see was made back in 2012. I rewrote the dialogues/text boxes for a better read, and this re-release is now for the first time on BZPower!

 

Expect a new chapter each Wednesday and Sunday.

 

I hope you enjoy!