Fire Entity
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Nice poem there..though some lines seem to have a few too many syllables, and some seem to be missing words, (third verse down seems like it should have a 'were', and a who, or else swap the last two words around.) and the 'god' at the end should be capitalised, as it is a proper noun. ~Vakon
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dude, maybe age has something to do with it, but I'm 5'8" and I got no problem shinnying up those tubes thats pretty cool, I didn't realize you were homeschooled too, and go to church, s'pretty neat. oo the sun is far away...*throws rock* aw man missed! *rock hits vakon on head* ow... congrats on your win Vance, I dont read blogs often, but yours I think was worth the time. ~Vakon