Scriptwriting
By Toa TAK,
So I'm asking, do you think this fits in, feels smooth? Here's an excerpt from the script.
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Cuts back to Tahu picking up the Krana.
Vakama (off screen):
But be warned: When worn, the Krana can steal the mind of whoever is wearing it. And not event the mightiest of Toa can resist the power of it.
Tahu:
Very well then Turaga.
The camera is over Tahu’s shoulders as he turns to face the other five Toa.
Tahu:
The rest of you, return to your villages to gather these Krana. If they will save Mata Nui, then we shall collect them all.
Kopaka:
That is, if they don’t collect us first. Farewell, Toa of Fire.
The camera cuts to an overhead shot of the Toa as they disperse, all but Gali.
Cut to close up of Gali as she looks around.
Gali:
Wait, their strength lies in numbers, wouldn’t be smarter and easier if we tackled each village together?
Onua:
While that’s true, who knows what kind of trouble our villages are in? We need to be there in case they need protection.
Onua continues to walk away.
Gali has a worried look on her face, and walks off screen.
Scene IV:
Tahu walks along his destroyed village, looking at destroyed huts and structures, until he eventually made his way to an entrance of a large cavern.
Cuts to close up on Tahu’s face. He looks up seeing darkness further on. Tahu switches to his Ruru lighting up the way. The camera cuts back to a distance. He walks on seeing a huge dome, with many of the pods popped out already. Tahu switches back to his Hau and he walks over to inspect it. There’s a noise and Tahu looks back. A Tahnok emerges from the shadows and walks closet towards Tahu. The camera takes a shot of the two, with the Tahnok on the left with Tahu on the right. Tahu takes a step forward, with his firesword glowing red.
The Bohrok takes a step forward.
Tahu:
Beware, creature, before things get a little hot…
The Tahnok attacks and his head strikes Tahu’s mask, sending it flying.
The camera cuts to the ground as the Golden Hau falls to the ground.
Then we have a shot of the Bohrok’s point of view. It has a targeting system and aims for Tahu’s head as he’s dazed.
Cut to a shot of the Tahnok opening its lid and firing its Krana Xa.
Another side shot of Tahu’s face and the Krana latches onto his face.
Cuts back to see Tahu struggling to take off the Krana from his face. He takes several steps back making grunting and muffling noises as he attempts to rip it from his face.
Tahu is able to rip if off his face making a tearing noise in the process. Tahu cries out in agony.
The Toa of Fire continues to breathe heavily, and sees his mask in the distance. He walks up to it and picks it up and puts it back on his face. He looks behind him, frightened. His firesword heats up and in rage shoots fire everywhere around him and runs out of the cavern.
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