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I never could get the hang of Thursdays.
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The place no one visits. I realize that I haven't been keeping up to date with my writing, epics, etc. My life has been rather hectic with school and will remain that way through next week. However, the following two weeks are exams and I'll have plenty of free time, since I'm exempt from all but Latin and English. (Assuming Gimp cooperates :angry: ) I'm going to be working on making awesome graphics for my library (Krom Possession in the Lewa Library) as well as a short story type thing that I'm still working out. It won't be much but it should be interesting so keep an eye out for updates there. Sea of Heroes, which hasn't been updated in over a month, is currently being worked on. I'm working on Chapter One at the moment. Kopaka Krom has already finished Chapter Two. I hope to get that story running very soon. I have been falling behind on To Return, so McNuggets has written the next chapter. I am going to be editting it tonight (after completely forgetting about it. Sorry. ) so that McNuggets can post it in the next several hours. And I've been dying to write the next chapter for Belly of the Blaze for a very long time and it's unfortunately going to have to wait a little longer as I try to catch up in my co-author epics. I also am completely rewriting Unaware, a short story I was going to post before I realized it probably was not appropriate for BZPower. I have kept the mood and the message but have now thrown in a little plot. It was originally supposed to be posted on the 15th anniversary of the Oklahoma City Bombing, but seeing as I missed that, I will go ahead and post it when it's finished. As summer approaches, I will be preparing to rewrite everything I have posted - Freedom of Lumo, Time, And How To End It, Belly of the Blaze, my chapters of To Return and Sea of Heroes, as well as anything else I may have skipped over. I can do much better than what I've posted, I just need to have a good night sleep and a break from school. This summer I intend to do a lot more writing including several short stories spin-offs of Belly of the Blaze as well as the Belly of the Blaze sequel, Glatorian Zombies. I will hopefully start my long-planned epic series, Lethal Purity. And speaking on this summer, there is less than two months until the Unofficial BZPower Epics Competition begins! Can't wait for that to start!
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McNuggets (aka LewatheChickenNuggets) and I are working on a graphic novel together. We have one person willing to color it for us (Thanks rawr! ). Can we have few more people who can use color pages for us?
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Today I got the first Fate of the Jedi (FINALLY it's in paperback). Unfortunately, I'm in the middle of Time Bomb and Angelmass, both by Timothy Zahn, so I'm trying to decide whether or not to quickly read Outcast or wait until I'm finished what I currently have to read. So, is Outcast an extremely exciting book or is it like the first book of Legacy of the Force, good, but not the best thing ever?
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I read three of Timothy Zahn's short stories today: The President's Doll (From the collection Time Bomb and Zahndry Others) Very interesting story. I didn't like the fact that they singled out Haita amongst other countries, though. Didn't do wonders for the crazy rumors about Hatians being evil that have spread through the US recently. Other than that, it was rather interesting overall. For those of you who haven't read it, in a nutshell it's a short story about the president being controlled by voodoo. I suggest you go buy it. It hasn't been in print for 20-30 years so check the Used books section of Amazon. Guardian Angel (From the collection Distant Friends and Other Stories) Another well written story. It kinda lacked his usual twist at the end in my opinion, but it was good nonetheless. Mrs. Leiberman sounds just like my grandmother. Personally, I wish more organizations worked like that. To give you a taste on what this one is about, there's a business that has started creating invisible bodyguards for people. They've started distributing them to test subjects, primarily the elderly and the poor. However, a news reporter wants to expose the secret behind them and how they become invisible. A very good read. Expanded Charter (From the collection Distant Friends and Other Stories) With just six pages, this would have to be my favorite story today. I had to reread once to figure out exactly what had happened. This story tells of a presidential assassination. I can't say much else without spoiling it. Like The President's Doll this has been out of print for a long time. For people who are already familiar with Timothy Zahn's works, I need advice on what would be the best to read next: AngelmassOdd Girl OutCascade PointTripletDeadman SwitchA Coming of Age I just can't decide.
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Today I'm going to catch on some writing. I'll be writing Chapter ? for To Return. I seem to have lost count there. I'll be writing Chapter 1 for Sea of Heroes and editting Lord of Ice's Chapter 2. Hopefully, I'll have some time to write Chapter 7 of Belly of the Blaze. I'm halfway through a short story called Unaware. It's about an attack on the Moto Hub in Metru Nui and features an Ussal crab. It should turn out good. If I have extra time, I'll work on rewrites of Freedom of Lumo and Time, And How To End It. Also, McNuggets and I are starting a new project (well, we changed the original idea). It should be pretty cool when it's finished but I doubt it'll be done for a while.
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I have started by own comedy: The Madu Cabola. Not much to say on the subject but I would like feedback. -LK
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Krom has entered the Blaze. Click to read more: -LK
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What happens when the Vahi is destroyed? Well check my 1000 post special here. Features Vakama and Vezon. Also has puzzle (ended up not being a logic puzzle, sorry guys ) in it. -LK
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Thomas Raith. Doesn't. Sparkle. And looking at the Storm Front comic book, neither does Bianca. EDIT: I have not read any Twilight books so this may be an unfair representation of the book series. Regardless, unless it has Bob or TOE-mass it can't beat Dresden.
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To Return by Lewa Krom and Lewathetoa - two great writers working together to produce one story!
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Just skimmed through the sneak peak of The Dresden Files RPG (Nevermore/Baltimore). It looks pretty cool, however the artwork isn’t that good, compared to the covers of the books at least. They just seem too cartoony in my opinion. Here’s a link to the RPG site. I'm about halfway through White Night. I lost the book midweek so I wasn't able to get alot of reading done there. I'm really hoping to have White Night, Small Favor, and Turn Coat all read in time for Changes. -LK
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Belly of the Blaze: Chapter Two is up. Read it here. In this chapter, a friend from Tirrii's past returns and the Visorak seem to have grown into Toa. -LK
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Mr. Bob who lives in a skull, what is a paradox?
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After debating with myself, I have decided to break the short story (it's not very short, to tell you the truth) into an epic. The first chapter is up and can be found here with the review topic here. The story has really become something I'm very proud of. The next story I plan to do will be another horror story and should be almost as good as this one. Also, if there's anyone out there who can make me a banner for the epic it would be greatly appreciated!
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I have about 50 pages left of Dead Beat. I did not see that coming (spoiler alert for anyone who hasn't gotten this far) » Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «Liver Spots is Crassus? And, let me get this straight, Crassus, former Knight of the Order of the Blackened Denarius, was killed by a medling morgue and a dumb dog? How ironic. -LK
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Some quotes from Dead Beat that I was reading today. I'm trying to finish the series before April so I can be ready for the new book. There was one more but it probably wouldn't fit BZP's rules. Also, I decided to post three others of my favorite quotes...
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I'm working on that at this very moment. Here's another excerpt: Criticism? I'll be working on this for most of the night and hopefully will be finished sometime this week! -LK
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At this moment, I am preparing for a weekend full of writing-only time (except for a few hours on Sunday when I go to a Jamboree meeting). I will still be looking around BZPower between chatpers/stories/scenes/sentences. Right now, my plans for writing include: Zaphyrus Industries Yeah, even though I cancelled Unity, the story that happened in it is more or less canon to the series of epics I'm working on. This short story will explore what excatly happened in Zaphyrus's dream in Chapter 4 of Unity. This will introduce you to the current leader of the Spitters (the former one "captured" in Freedom of Lumo) and will expand on Notul as he has great importance to the first few books of the upcoming series. Belly of the Blaze A man goes on a journey to deliver a package with mysterious contents to an unnamed planet while being hunted down by a bounty hunter. Along the way, the transport is blown up by one of the bounty hunter’s aids and the ship crashlands on a frozen asteroid releasing the contents of the package into the little air the survivors have available to them. This story will be written in two forms: as a non-Bionicle non-Lethal Purity story and another version as a Lethal Purity story. There will be a sequel to the Lethal Purity version of the story. These stories will not be posted until AFTER March 15 (the deadline of the contest) The Connection Another non-Bionicle story about a world where "journals" chronicle a person’s life so that it may be published in an archive which has caused crime rates to go significantly down (haven't figured out the details yet). A certain journal finds out that its creator/owner has been captured by a group of terrorists. The journal stresses the connection between its creator and itself to try to rescue his creator. Killer Light This may or may not be a Lethal Purity story as I could easily make it one. On a strange planet, light has evolved into a race of killers who destroy everything and use up resources because they don’t need them. The other species there struggle to survive as their shelters are destroyed daily by light workers they call “Drillers”. A handful decide to stand up against the Drillers. Not much thought into this yet. I got the idea looking at a lamp. Lethal Purity #1 I'm going to begin writing the first book in the series which will be around 20 chapters. If someone wants to write in the world I've created, let me know and I'll put together a guide similar to the EM guide for people to use. I may put together a guide just to help people understand what everything is. I have many, many more writing ideas, but these are the ones I'm working on this weekend. My priorities are Belly of the Blaze, Lethal Purity #1, and, for know reason other than the desire to do so, Killer Light.
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I am in my school's writing club and we're entering a short story competition. I've decided to abbreviate by original plans for an epic into a short story. This will mean that it will not be a Bionicle based story, however I will post the short story I write here after the competition (sometime in March) and switch out some things to make it fit into the Lethal Purity universe. I just thought I'd post this if anyone cared. For those of you who came looking for a BNG update, I'll post in later on tonight (sorry about not doing one yesterday) -LK
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Critisism? Please? (also A Little Bng In There Too!)
Lewa Krom posted a blog entry in blogs_blog_1582
I've been working on a three-part story I'm going to post in my blog. To give you a little background, this takes place in my Lethal Purity universe. If anyone read by epic "Unity," I attempted to introduce the universe but I feel like I did a pretty bad job. Therefore, I've reorganized the Lethal Purity series. To read this story, Belly of the Blaze, you will not have to have read anything prior to this (though I'd appreciate reviews in those topics! ). I want some critsism on the second version of the opening (first one was eaten by a virus ) That's supposed to be a letter, if you couldn't tell, and is how I plan on opening the story. I would like critisism to make this better. I feel like throwing in an advertisement for Justified Shadows, a story written by lewathetoa. Chapter 5 is up (and I will review VERY soon!) On a completely different note, Bionicle: Next Generation is doing very well. We have 16 new voice acting oppurtunities, most of which are minor characters. The poll for the 2006 script is up. Animation is looking awesome. If you haven't already, listen to Nusua's theme for The Crossing. Very awesome! Before I end my second entry, I'd like to thank Neelh and Sir Scinos for their approvals! So yeah, if you could give me critisism for the excerpt from the short epic, please do. -LK