Tahu

[Mehul]

A sketch:

 

[Astris Janus]

My Mata Nui, this is good!

I'm loving the style; very organic and mechanical (exactly as it should be ), looking like it could be real while maintaining the look of pieces within the set I'm also rather impressed by the way you chose to render his name; nice and simple, very stylish though.

Only criticisms would be that it'd be nice to see some more detail on the sword, the "A" in "Tahu" seems to be missing its crossbar (though that could've been intentional) and the fact that the end of "Mata" doesn't end flush with the end of "Tahu" (forgive me for nitpicking, I was in a design course and I kinda pick up on that stuff )

Overall, pretty fantastic Keep it up

 

Astris Janus

[Grandmaster Lehvorak]

This sketch has potential! I really like the concept a lot! The details are coming along really well, are you planning on inking this? Also the type-face (The title that says Tahu) could be a little bigger. Overall, nice stuff you got here!

 

-Lehvorak

[NickonAquaMagna]

The thighs are my favorite part. It's very tricky to make all those components mesh and flow together, but you've pulled it off.

[Hitoshura]

I like the details you put, looks nice. The thighs just don't seem to fit in with the rest of the body, like it looks un-mechanical/Bionicle piece-ish with the rest.

[Wazdakka]

I adore the fusion of flesh and machine, but I think his shoulders need to be bulked out more.

[Sybre]

A sketch, you say? No, this is a full-on piece of art! Like Wazdakka said, I like the combination of flesh and machine!

[Mehul]

Thanks for all the feedback guys!

 

Since this was done in a random rush of bionicle nostalgia I cant say with surety that I might be doing the other toas for sure but I might.

 

As for the name well as a design student myself I perfectly understand the nitpick and now that I see it the misalignment is atrocious!