Bonkle Posted May 12, 2016 Author Posted May 12, 2016 Last two chapters are up. (Story note: For those who didn't realize, Petewa tripped on purpose in chapter 3. The "plan" he didn't want to screw up was his sabotage mission, which is also why he smiled when he saw Dragon and Kovika being captured.) Quote I been away a long time.
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted May 13, 2016 Posted May 13, 2016 That was...well...a fitting ending to say the least. 8/10. Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf
The 1st Shadow Posted May 13, 2016 Posted May 13, 2016 Finally caught up, and I have to say that felt like a decent ending, though the chapters leading up to it felt a bit rushed. Nonetheless, I enjoyed this, and I can't wait to read any future projects you may have planned. 8.5/10 1 Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~
Bonkle Posted May 13, 2016 Author Posted May 13, 2016 Thanks for the feedback, guys. I'll try and make it move slower next time. But thanks for staying with this project, I've been doing this for a while now! 1 Quote I been away a long time.
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