BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted February 19, 2016 Posted February 19, 2016 (edited) Alrighty folks this is the review topic for my 1st story "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" here is where you can ask any questions like when is the next chapter coming out or if you have any ideas for a character that you would like me to use then please give a bio. Edited March 31, 2016 by BronzeJet (I can FLY) Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted February 21, 2016 Author Posted February 21, 2016 you should probably read it before looking in here Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted February 22, 2016 Author Posted February 22, 2016 alrighty i have set a goal to post a new chapter every saturday and if i get famous enough then i will post one on saturday and one on wednesday but for now it's every saturday Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted February 28, 2016 Author Posted February 28, 2016 next chapter is up Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted March 6, 2016 Author Posted March 6, 2016 alrighty folks the next chapter is up and PLEASE post a character bio Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
Toa Imrukii Posted March 6, 2016 Posted March 6, 2016 (edited) Ironically, you created a line of quintuplet posts. I assume, whoever you were responding to had their original responces deleted, I hope you don't get in trouble for this though, that would be stupid. Believe me, I have gotten in trouble for techincalities like this on a certain site that shall not be spoken of by a certain group who shall not be spoken of either. Have a good day! Edited March 6, 2016 by Toa Imrukii Quote Quote: "Love has no fear, and no vengeance." | :i: | Andekas ⴳ A RUDE AWAKENING - A BIONICLE G1 Continuation and Video Game Project (ARTIST AND CONCEPTUALIST) | I am an ENFP, that is my Personality. Check Out Makuta Teridax: Reaper of Darkness | Check out my Taknuva Stars MOC | ⴳ
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted March 9, 2016 Author Posted March 9, 2016 ok so do you want to post a character bio or are you just telling me this cause i honesly already had those ready from a different site witch shal not be spoken of and i have no idea for what to do yet. Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted March 13, 2016 Author Posted March 13, 2016 (edited) ok chapter 4 is up don't forget to post a character Bio Edited March 13, 2016 by BronzeJet (I can FLY) Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
Petewa Posted March 13, 2016 Posted March 13, 2016 STOP BOTHERING ME! Fine, a blue haired, slightly obsessive asian lady with reddish brown eyes by the name of Dai Kalamar. Quote Mataru Nui, an Interactive Adventure
Bonkle Posted March 13, 2016 Posted March 13, 2016 (edited) I haven't had the time to check out this epic before, but now that I have it's pretty good! In only four chapters you've already made me care about Scott and what happens to him. For a character, how about a somewhat unhinged blond guy, about six feet tall, with ripped jeans and a bomber jacket because why not. Edited March 13, 2016 by Chromedome Quote I been away a long time.
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted March 13, 2016 Author Posted March 13, 2016 okay 1 Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted March 20, 2016 Author Posted March 20, 2016 Okay next chapter is up. ---> http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/21737-the-tale-of-a-murderers-brother/ Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
Bonkle Posted March 20, 2016 Posted March 20, 2016 Good chapter! Seems like a big walker fight is coming. Quote I been away a long time.
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted March 20, 2016 Author Posted March 20, 2016 yeah i'm surprised that i do this really quickly every saturday which is my deadline for posting them by the way and i never really have any motivation for them i just stop everything else that i'm doing and type. Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted March 25, 2016 Author Posted March 25, 2016 is it wrong that i am already planning to kill somebody in this story Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted March 26, 2016 Author Posted March 26, 2016 ok next chapter is up Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
Bonkle Posted March 27, 2016 Posted March 27, 2016 Awesome as usual! I'm guessing the new character was the one I suggested? Quote I been away a long time.
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted March 27, 2016 Author Posted March 27, 2016 yes i would have made it longer but i try to keep the to 1 google docs page and this was literally as long as i could make it with it staying on one page Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
Bonkle Posted March 28, 2016 Posted March 28, 2016 yes i would have made it longer but i try to keep the to 1 google docs page and this was literally as long as i could make it with it staying on one pageNo problem, I try to keep chapters of my stories to set lengths as well. Quote I been away a long time.
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted March 28, 2016 Author Posted March 28, 2016 i am probably going to be starting up a new story soon if i do then i will post a link to it and its review topic by wednesday Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted March 30, 2016 Author Posted March 30, 2016 okay so i decided to do this new story and here is the link -------> Mr. DNA Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted April 4, 2016 Author Posted April 4, 2016 sorry for not having the next chapter up yet i will have it up by the end of the day though Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted April 5, 2016 Author Posted April 5, 2016 ok the next chapter is out Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
Bonkle Posted April 5, 2016 Posted April 5, 2016 Cool as usual! Do you have a plan for where the story will end up/how many chapters there are, or are you just coming up with it as you go? 1 Quote I been away a long time.
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted April 5, 2016 Author Posted April 5, 2016 i just think of it as i write them but i do plan on killing someone maybe in chapter 12 Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted April 11, 2016 Author Posted April 11, 2016 so ya sorry for not having a new chapter up yet i had a family member visit and then went to buy groceries and the snacks buried my labtop Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted April 11, 2016 Author Posted April 11, 2016 i will get it up today though same with civil war Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted April 19, 2016 Author Posted April 19, 2016 sorry i am behind on two chapters i went to orlando and need to get then up sorry Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted April 25, 2016 Author Posted April 25, 2016 sorry they aren't up yet but i promise i will do that soon Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015
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