Tarn Posted March 12, 2016 Share Posted March 12, 2016 The review topic for my epic, Another Time and Place.GIMME YA FEEDBACK Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarn Posted March 26, 2016 Author Share Posted March 26, 2016 (edited) New chapter up~(Huh, well. Datrox was told by Vantos back in A New Lease on Life that the Olmak Thief was a Dark Hunter...legitimately forgot about that. Doesn't clash horribly with this chapter but darnit I feel like a comic writer who needs a frickin' editor. May need to rewrite that exchange just a little) Edited March 30, 2016 by Pat Lee Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarn Posted April 12, 2016 Author Share Posted April 12, 2016 New chapter up, and some edits made to chapter two to fix some issues.I don't think "multiversal" is a word, but it feels like it should be. Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarn Posted April 27, 2016 Author Share Posted April 27, 2016 whoa what's thatNEW CHAPTER EVEN THOUGH NO ONE READS THIS(doesn't matter tho i'm not diggin' it that much and i'm writing it) Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarn Posted May 4, 2016 Author Share Posted May 4, 2016 New chapter, in which I begin to rip off More Than Meets The Eye. Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junior Shark Posted May 9, 2016 Share Posted May 9, 2016 Just read all of it, and I'm really diggin' it! With Teridax entering the picture, things are about to get pretty interesting. I'd imagine. So when I visualize Idyx, I see an Umarak-esque figure. That about right? Quote If you wait until the last minute, then it only takes one minute. Flickr BZPRPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarn Posted May 9, 2016 Author Share Posted May 9, 2016 Just read all of it, and I'm really diggin' it! With Teridax entering the picture, things are about to get pretty interesting. I'd imagine. So when I visualize Idyx, I see an Umarak-esque figure. That about right?Yup. Just with the color scheme of Krekka (white head, dark blue armor), something I haven't been able to establish. And thanks for reading, man. Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junior Shark Posted May 9, 2016 Share Posted May 9, 2016 Oooh, dark blue and white Umarak? Nice. This topic seemed a little empty, figured I might as well throw you a bone check out your unsung genius. Really though, I like this story so far and I can't wait for the next installment! Quote If you wait until the last minute, then it only takes one minute. Flickr BZPRPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarn Posted May 10, 2016 Author Share Posted May 10, 2016 Welp here's your next installment. Chapter six is up.Things are about to hit the fan. Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junior Shark Posted May 10, 2016 Share Posted May 10, 2016 Wow. Talk about a cliffhanger. I think it's too late to say, "Things are about to hit the fan." Things just did hit the fan, and in a real big way. What next? The Toa team up with Idyx? I assume Makuta has the Olmak, which can't be a good thing. Quote If you wait until the last minute, then it only takes one minute. Flickr BZPRPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarn Posted May 10, 2016 Author Share Posted May 10, 2016 *Greg Farshety voice* All will be revealed.But on the Olmak--the way I saw it was that Kavi still had it, and that since the Olmak doesn't exist in this dimension Makuta wouldn't realize its potential, or just what Idlyx was doing. I know that's essentially author intent but hey. Should've probably put a line about him "still clutching it" or something but that feels like a digression. Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarn Posted May 12, 2016 Author Share Posted May 12, 2016 Chapter seven up.You'd think the fact that Teridax could friggin' CONSUME people and use them to make himself stronger would've come up more in G1.Also, Tuyet penitentiary is located in Ga-Metru. I uh, guess the name could be seen as an indicator for that? Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junior Shark Posted May 19, 2016 Share Posted May 19, 2016 (edited) Noice. Talk about cookin'! But why do you write such short entries? It's sooo frustrating! Edited May 19, 2016 by Junior Shark Quote If you wait until the last minute, then it only takes one minute. Flickr BZPRPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarn Posted May 19, 2016 Author Share Posted May 19, 2016 I don't want them to be horribly long and I also sometimes just can't think of anything else to put. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junior Shark Posted May 19, 2016 Share Posted May 19, 2016 (edited) True dat. Having never written an epic, just chalk my frustration up to ignorance. FWIW, reading your epic has gotten me more interested in writing my own. Edited May 19, 2016 by Junior Shark Quote If you wait until the last minute, then it only takes one minute. Flickr BZPRPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarn Posted May 19, 2016 Author Share Posted May 19, 2016 Ah, cool! I'd definitely be interested in reading it if you ever get around to writing one. Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarn Posted June 8, 2016 Author Share Posted June 8, 2016 New chapter up.Surprise! Admiral Vantos is basically Sentinel Prime from Transformers: Animated and Datrox is his Optimus. Also, as you can tell, Nale's job is very important to her.As I was writing this I realized that the Olmak sorta seems like it disappeared--don't worry, it's merely in hammerspace currently, somewhere on Kavi's person. Although I DID almost end the chapter with it turning out he accidentally left it back at the penitentiary, but that would've been kinda dumb. Quote [BZPRPG] (shout out to max) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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