W.A.M.W Posted May 29, 2016 Share Posted May 29, 2016 So here's the other MOC that you probably saw in some photos of the first MOC that I posted on here. This is what my interpretation of what Ekimu would look like as a Toa. You could call this a self MOC, but I built this before I made my BZP account and actually named my account after this MOC (which is also my profile pic). Feedback is always appreciated, and without further ado: the MOC. https://flic.kr/p/FAHRcc https://flic.kr/p/GtHvzy https://flic.kr/p/GtHE4C https://flic.kr/p/FAJLue https://flic.kr/p/GqfsA3 https://flic.kr/p/FUQ15d 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyichir Posted May 29, 2016 Share Posted May 29, 2016 Very interesting MOC. I can tell you're no novice at MOCing, and there are some interesting techniques at play here, but a lot of parts of the model seem a bit overdesigned. The legs look fairly nice, but the torso has a lot of added bulk and details that complicate its silhouette and negatively impact its overall "flow", while the arms seem almost underwhelming by comparison, with very bony arms that seem to be at odds with the heavy armor elsewhere on the model. If I had to make a recommendation it'd be to focus a little more on simplifying and streamlining the model's silhouette and making the level of detail from one section to another more consistent. Quote Formerly Lyichir: Rachira of Influence Aanchir's and Meiko's brother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Invisible Handman Posted May 30, 2016 Share Posted May 30, 2016 I like many of the details you've put into this. The lower arms need something covering them, and the back needs less covering it, he looks a bit hunched from his torso shape. Quote {Brickshelf Page - BZPRPG Profile - HFRPG Profile - Project Protodermis Profile} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
W.A.M.W Posted June 3, 2016 Author Share Posted June 3, 2016 Thanks for the feedback, guys. I have been doing some editing to the MOC thanks to your advice. Anyway, feedback from everybody else is appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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