Biohazard12 Posted January 4, 2012 Posted January 4, 2012 (edited) Hey guys, today I'm gonna show you, my first PBZP, and possibly one of my best MOCs to date; I present to you:PBZP D!!!! He asked for a tall, bulky, black and metru red figure, with gunmetal armor, a broadsword as a weapon, chains around the broadsword, right arm, and across the chest, and to use the Kanohi Sanok. Sorry about the bad quality, guys. I took these photos using my iPod touch, so they're not very good.Anyways, here are some more pics:FrontFront PoseFront No WeaponSideBackBack DetailSword detailGallery (when public)Will post new pics by request, so just ask, and I'll have it up the next day. So, DARKSIDERZ, whaddya think? I doubt that it's as good as the awesome PBZP you made me, but I think I did okay. Please post your thoughts on this, and, as always, C&C are always welcome. See ya! Edited January 4, 2012 by Biohazard12 Quote ATTENTION!!!!!!!Hey guys, I'm making PBZPs now, so please PM me with details! You know you want one! completed: 1 in progress: 0 pending: 1A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z
BrickPharaoh Posted January 4, 2012 Posted January 4, 2012 Whoa! Okay. Let me criticize every bit on its own...The torso is by far the best thing about this MOC, I really love it. The way the chain is placed is also cool.The upper arms are awesome too, but the lower arms are a bit too long and, well, weird. They seem a bit gappy. Moreover, the hands are a tad too small for the general look of the MOC. The legs are also fine, and they are bulky enough to go with the overall look. But honestly, I don't really like the sword. I'd expected a much shorter grip because this one actually looks like a spear.So I'll give you the overall opinion of the MOC:Torso: 9.5/10Arms: 7.25/10Legs:8.25/10Weapon: 6.75/10Mean: 7.8/10, mainly because of the weapon and lower arms.Nice job, and thanks! Quote "Welcome to Valhalla, Warrior." Recent MOC's: The Headless Horseman (BBC71 Finalist) LDD CCBS Chess The Shadowed One (BBC69) Nydoretha (Netherealm Empress)
Biohazard12 Posted January 5, 2012 Author Posted January 5, 2012 Yea... One thing you forgot to mention was that you also asked for a hooded cape, but I completely forgot about it. Also, I don't know if I would've been able to find it anyway; the Vezon cape was probably buried in my attic anyways. Thank you for the criticism, I will most likely use it to make a revamped version. Quote ATTENTION!!!!!!!Hey guys, I'm making PBZPs now, so please PM me with details! You know you want one! completed: 1 in progress: 0 pending: 1A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z
Eragon3443 Posted January 21, 2012 Posted January 21, 2012 You fit his descri[tion ectremely well. The color scheme could probably mesh a bit better, but he still looks great! Quote Feel free to friend me!
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