Vapor 3.0

[Pahrak Model ZX]

A while back I made an upgraded version of Vapor and asked for feedback so I could improve upon him. I did my best, but I'd still like some feedback please--if I have to modify him any more, I'm all for it.ZMoC-12-01: Vapor 3.0:Vapor's upgraded form was no match for the combined power of Bulk and Furno, and he was captured and brought into the Hero Factory. With the recent breakout, however, he has escaped us yet again and upgraded once more. Bulk, we hear he still wants revenge on you, so be extra-cautious! Vapor 3.0 has a network of corrosive mist tubes and vents all throughout his armor, powering his weapons and allowing him to release a cloud around himself whenever he wants. He's been seen wielding a claw with mist vents that can shoot out on a cable, a shoulder-mounted grappling hook, and a new mist blaster that's stronger and more precise than ever! This assassin must be stopped before he starts chalking up even more kills!"I hope your life's been fulfilling."Back viewAimingGrappling hookRocket claw"Think you've got a shot? Go on. Take it."GalleryJust tried some new pieces. Any better? Any specific things that could be improved upon?EDIT: A Gallery with some new Vapor options

Edited January 9, 2012 by SSJ Pahrak

[Akuna Toa of Sonics]

You did make an upgrade, but it's still kind of flawed. The chest has two different colored pins on the top, and it seems a little empty. Everything else looks great.

[Lenore]

Looks great but the torso is a bit small, he could also use some buffing up.

[Pahrak Model ZX]

I was afraid the torso seemed a bit odd. I'll have to experiment with a few different torsos...As far as buffing up goes, eh...I feel that if he gets too buff I won't be able to pass him off as an assassin, but I'll play around with some pieces and see what I come up with.

[The Great Spirit DM]

Mata blue + Metru blue = bad idea.The claw's usage (on the back) was good, though I'd recommend a different color.Oh, and are those thighs double jointed?

Edited January 6, 2012 by Nujanii: Kanohi Master

[Pahrak Model ZX]

Okay, I'll try refining the color scheme.Maybe Gali Mata's hook?Yeah, the thighs are doubled--seemed the best way to make his legs long enough.

[Lenore]

I like the metru and mata blues together! Don't change the colors!

[Pahrak Model ZX]

I think I'll try a few different options, take pictures of all of them, and then put them here for feedback.

[Pahrak Model ZX]

Thank you, I'll try using more blue on the legs and some different feet!

[FrozenFlash]

His legs are a bit long and it looks awkward that there are 2 joints connected to the gun.

[Pahrak Model ZX]

So shorter legs and an altered gun...I'll try that.EDIT: In case anyone's reading, just took some pictures of a few different Vapor options. I tried some different torsos, limbs, weapon modifications, and such, and put a few of them together (although not every combination was photographed for obvious reasons). Just need to wait for the Brickshelf Gallery to go public, and I'll post a link. If you guys could review them and point out a few pieces that you like (maybe some alternate combinations), I'd be most thankful!

Edited January 9, 2012 by SSJ Pahrak