xeneus Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 (edited) Hi, I'm xeneus and this is my first topic so tell me how I'm doing.Here are some MOC's I've been working on:Metax:pose 1: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0521.jpgpose 2: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0522.jpgZuron:pose 1: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0511.jpgpose 2: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0512.jpgZantar: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0520.jpgCorrux: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0525.jpgChanaz:pose 1: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0523.jpgpose 2: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0524.jpgAnd here is one hero factory MOC I made:Rocka mantis:normal: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0518.jpgmonster: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0519.jpgTips and constructive criticism appreciated!-xeneusEDIT: the rest of my MOC's are now also on the first post:thernas:pose 1: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0528.jpgpose 2: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0536.jpgback: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0543.jpg(unnamed for now)front: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0577.jpgside: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0578.jpgback: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0580.jpggreat being onua:front: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0595.jpgside: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0597.jpgback: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0598.jpgtop: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0599.jpg Edited April 14, 2012 by xeneus Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 Sir, you do fine work on your MOCs. My favorite has to be Zantar. He's so cute that I want to see more pics of him! And I noticed your cat a few times.Welcome to BZPower, by the way! Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark_Stranger Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 First of all, welcome to BZPower!Secondly, several of these show real promise. Corrux and Chanaz, in particular, are very nicely done. Zantar looks pretty cool, but it's rather hard to tell from that angle (I find it best to photograph my models from several different viewpoints). The first two look rather jumbled and unfinished, though, so you might want to work on that."But as long as I'm here, I get to bust heads!" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ehlekdude Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 Welcome to BZPower!About the MOCs, my favourite is definately Corrux, that colour scheme and shoulders look really nice. Zantar is cute, but that angle could be better. Oh, and you have a nice cat. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parazan Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 Please show more pictures of your cat Zantar,as he is my favorite! Quote Coming June 22nd: Your chance to become an ECC critic! Power of the pen in your hands! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 They're all unique in their own way, and my favorites have to be Metax and Corrux - their designs seem to be the coolest of the bunch. That's not to say that the others don't exhibit their own interest builds, because they do. Nice work.-Ced Quote Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwanny Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 Of course, i've seen most of these already, but they still surprise me all the time!...ohai there mister cat.corrux does remain my favorite, but the other ones are cool as well.-Dwanny Quote Find me over here! http://danielvangele.tumblr.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeneus Posted April 4, 2012 Author Share Posted April 4, 2012 Thanks guys! I like to hear my work is appreciated! Now about Zuron, for those who want to know, I made him about a year ago and am not entirely satisfied with him myself and Metax was a MOC that is basically finished but I want to work on him some more. As for Corrux and Chanaz I know they do not have any mask/helmet and that is because I can't choose (give some ideas!) And as for my cat his name is Arthur. Say hi!-xeneus Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fsnorglepuff Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 Fairly good MOCs here. I like the big fin weapon, and using the Visorak minifig as a mask/face. Chanaz is bay far the best; the torso is unique, and the legs are very well color layered. A treat to loot at, truly. Overall, my impression is that none of these became the best they could be - you clearly have talent, but it shows in scattered places of brilliance. Try focusing on one MOC, for a long time if necessary, and perfect it. If what I am seeing here is any indication, the result would be wonderful. Keep MOCing! Quote Toa Gali Nuva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeneus Posted April 5, 2012 Author Share Posted April 5, 2012 Hi everybody! I just finished another MOC and didn't want to make a whole new topic for it. The proporsions are a bit weird but I still like it. So now I present you:thernas:pose 1: http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/xeneus/MOCs/dscn0528.jpgpose 2: http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/xeneus/MOCs/dscn0536.jpgback: http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/xeneus/MOCs/dscn0543.jpgI didn't get Arthur in these, sorry! http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/sighw.gif Hai Arthur!My grandmother is visiting here today and she knows a thing or two about photography so I will be working on that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akuna Toa of Sonics Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 Out of all of these, my favorites would have to be Metax and Zuron. Zuron could use some work, but the visorak minifig for a mask is amazing. Metax has just an outstanding color scheme and build. Quote Does anyone want to play the Master Chief Collection with me? I'm trying to get a team going for ranked. PM for GT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeneus Posted April 5, 2012 Author Share Posted April 5, 2012 I made another one and am busy with yet another so:(unnamed for now)front: http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/xeneus/MOCs/dscn0577.jpgside: http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/xeneus/MOCs/dscn0578.jpgback: http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/xeneus/MOCs/dscn0580.jpgI'll be making more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pantera Posted April 6, 2012 Share Posted April 6, 2012 (edited) I'm basing this off of the first post.Metax: Very cool. 10/10Zuron: Looks kind of [odd]. 4/10Zantar: Cool Chibi. 7/10Corrux: Ursum! 10/10 Also: KITTAH!Chanaz: Pretty cool! 8/10 That random Zamor must be hard to keep in place! It also took away form the score, though. Oh well! KITTAH!Rocka Mantis: Were you bored? It's just kinda weird for me. 4/10OVERALL: 7.8/10Reuslt: ULTRA COOL!Prize: :tohu:CONGRATULATIONS!EDIT: Like Z's and X's, do ya? Edit: Please try to offer constructive criticism without being harsh. Also, please try to be more specific about what you like or don't like about the MOCs next time, as this is a borderline generic post.-Wind- Edited April 6, 2012 by -Windrider- Quote Led Zeppelin? Yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeneus Posted April 6, 2012 Author Share Posted April 6, 2012 Hi guys! I thought it would be a good idea to, like pantera said I should, tell y'all what I think of my MOC's.Metax: very cool and I couldn't think of anything that could make him much better. I give him a 10/10zuron: FAIL!1/10(in all seriousness I really dislike this guy A LOT!)Zantar: Allright, I don't like him much nor do I dislike him. 5/10Corrux: This was my first MOC of my latest building spree and still probably the best.10/10Chanaz: I don't mind him much but if I would show someone this for the first time ever and not tell them I made it they would probably mistake it for my little sisters. 6/10Rocka mantis: Yes, I was most certainly bored. I don't tend to have much good inspiratin when it comes to hero factory. 4/10Thernas: Probably my favorite one yet. 10/10(unnamed): I was inspired by a MOC I had made about a year or two ago. The only thing I have to say the only thing that's different is also one of my favorite parts, the arms.I'll be busy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwanny Posted April 6, 2012 Share Posted April 6, 2012 I'll say one thing about the new MOC's you posted:Awesome.Fairly good MOCs here. I like the big fin weapon, and using the Visorak minifig as a mask/face. Chanaz is bay far the best; the torso is unique, and the legs are very well color layered. A treat to loot at, truly. Overall, my impression is that none of these became the best they could be - you clearly have talent, but it shows in scattered places of brilliance. Try focusing on one MOC, for a long time if necessary, and perfect it. If what I am seeing here is any indication, the result would be wonderful. Keep MOCing! I totally agree."scattered places of brilliance". I totally lol'd Quote Find me over here! http://danielvangele.tumblr.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pantera Posted April 6, 2012 Share Posted April 6, 2012 (edited) Thernas: Awesome. 10/10Unnamed: An interesting WIP. Isn't it a WIP? The shoulder things make it look like something cool is going to happen there! 10/10Overall: 10/10Result: PERFECTION!Prize: :vahi:Congratulations!(That wasn't too harsh. )Edit: True, true. : P But try to work on being a little more specific. Even if there is nothing to critique, you could, perhaps, point out exactly what works well. Feedback like that helps the MOCist! -Windy- Edited April 6, 2012 by -Windrider- Quote Led Zeppelin? Yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeneus Posted April 8, 2012 Author Share Posted April 8, 2012 (edited) Hi, guy's! I am taking a short trip to Paris so I'll be gone for four days but I can tell you that I have been busy and am even so satisfied with one MOC that I will make a seperate topic for it.(link to it when it's there!)-= =-Allright, I'm back from Paris and have a new MOC for ya:great being onua:front: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0595.jpgside: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0597.jpgback: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0598.jpgtop: http://www.brickshel...Cs/dscn0599.jpgAfter the toa mata vanquished the world of makuta's evil grip and spherus magna was reformed they became great beings themselves in thanks for their accomplishments. onua was granted the strength to reform the entire galaxy.-= =- Edited April 13, 2012 by Makaru Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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